That was good. Deep and well thought about by Kaiba. I enjoyes reading it!

wow, this is great! you write really well. The part about him shattering like her tear was a beautiful metaphore.

I think that she would call him Kaiba, but I'm not sure how well they know each other in this story.

I think it's really cool that you wrote this, because my sister and I think these two go good together too!

Very good. I like I said, you're really truly good at writing. I just don't know where I stand. Maybe I'm good, maybe I'm not.

Oh well.

Have you read my story 'All Alone'? In my opinion, it's the best I've done.

Sayonara!

Capybara 773

PS. Sorry about me going on about my anxieties.

i like your story a lot!

can you please add one more chapter?..just one?

It's just beautiful.

What else should I say?

Yeah, it definitely sounds like it could become a brilliant sequel! D

Even though I don't watch Yu-gi-oh, I know who Seto is, and I already hate that guy... and isn't Serenity Joey's little sister? Yeah, I'm kind of confused...! XD But not because of you, because of the fact I'm never around when it's on...

So, anyway, it's cute! And I like how you're showing Seto's feelings, he's not just a jackoff, ja? )

*very anti-seto* *Favorite character is Joey*

XxMikoxX

I loved it can you please continue? ]

-Nina-

I love his description of her and stuff, with the tear "shattering" and yeah...you write really well.

Hey! I REALLY liked that 1shot! I'm writing a 1shot called Oh Mai God! It's SerenityxSeto too!

Aw I luv it. Add to favs.