I just finished reading your story and I really liked it. It did feel a little rushed at the end but over all 9.5 out of 10 .

I just started reading your story! Very good

really good. :)

that was an amazing story keep up the awesome ›:]

oh goodie i love a good old shinoxhina story although alot of people dont like the pair i personally love it ›:]

no offence but i think it was a bit rushed. but i still liked it tho and i'm thinking of liking the duo maybe even write my own fic bout them. but we'll see. only time will tell. great story! even though slightly rushed i liked it. you could have spent a chapter on how they meet after years or sumfin but yeah...you're the writer and you know best...for this story. D

um if you ever see this review i just wanted to ask how old exactly are the genins? or are they even genins? it's just i'm super confused is all. oh n good chap.

Oouuuu SNAP! the bug boiz a real closet pervert! lawl! nah it was kinda a blush worthy moment. heh -_

why is naruto ALWAYS sticking on like some sort of an annoying pimple? ugh!

three white butterflies?really? damn you! you made me smile at shino's romantic-ness (if that's a word).

hahaha! hinata's been giving you the "looks"! so far your writing is good. i'm not too sure about the pairing cause you know it's shino for goodness gracious! you can't warm up to him having a heart for our heroine too soon now can you? anyways as i said it was a good read but i'll have to read more to see if i fall in love with this pairing like all the other hina pairings. totally depends on your story. i'll let you knoe in the end if you managed to change my mind. D

As much as I am a fan of the NaruHina relationship, because of this, the ShinoHina romance comes in second.

Hmmm.I think it got a tiny bit rocky in some points but other than that I like it.

This is an awesome fic! I am so glad that I was able to find a quality, ShinoHina, chapter fic. You did an awesome job! Keep up the great work!

I am sorry I didn't review each chapter but between life and being caught up in your story I just wanted to finish it. You have extraordinary writing skills and should definitely continue in any vein that catches your attention. This was a great story and I plan to read more. I also agree with your profile, if our writings were perfect there would be no editors. They have their place too... when imagination is flowing typos/mistypes happen it's just the mind working faster than the fingers... LOL Congrats this is a wonderful piece.