 lindajrjt 2008-02-08 . chapter 17This story was very good; but it would have been better to have it end knowing what had happened to Tollany and company even though I know they were in custody for the wrongs that they did. My surprise at the story was when they ran into some of her people that did not hold the same views that she did. Very good plot and thanks. |
 001ElvenWarrior 2006-06-08 . chapter 17Wow, its nice to see Cadman isn't entirely without faults. Good to know that Carson is still alive and kicking - I guess we'll see what he thinks about: getting a taste of his own medicine. Lol.
Very nice, I look forward to seeing what happens to Tollany and the other mischievious doca - as well as the recovery of Carson :D Poor guy. Anyway, Keep up the Awesome Work! You've done very well so far! |
 Seanait 2006-06-06 . chapter 17LOL! very good chapter, especially love the ending! didnt know carson was so funny when 'laid up' as Rodney says...
very cool... more soon! |
 glocap 2006-06-06 . chapter 16How much more can poor Carson endure? He's experienced some pain in this fic. I love how you've captured his sweet, caring, yet tough and tenacious personality. |
 SGFlutegirl 2006-06-05 . chapter 17Just read this all the way through and wow!! That was fantastic. Poor Carson!! I loved that most everyone was whumped, even Lorne!! Great job!! |
 blueoctober 2006-06-03 . chapter 17I loved your ending...:) I'm glad Carson is okay. |
 Pike2 2006-06-03 . chapter 17Great story, loved the ending. Hoping for more soon...
Thanks for sharing |
 sherryw 2006-06-03 . chapter 17Another great chapter. I loved the conversation between Beckett and Cadman I can so see that happening. I'm really sad now because the story is coming to an end. *dabs eye with a tissue* Looking forward to a few more chapters if you have it in you. Update soon! |
 Aussie Munchkin 2006-06-03 . chapter 17Aw...mate. I loved it! And Carson lived!Yay! Great story mate. :)
Munchy |
 fififolle 2006-06-03 . chapter 17Aw! *claps and cheers* That was lovely! The tension of stabilising Carson was very good, but the relief of his certain recovery was palpable. Laura was just great, that was a gorgeous moment when Carson woke up. For a moment there I liked Beckett/Cadman! Lovely end. Shame its all over, it was a grand read. Well done! |
 Aussie Munchkin 2006-06-02 . chapter 16*clears throat* He hemm...NO! Not my cuddley Carson bear! Die Tollany!
Anyways, now that I've let that out, this is a wonderfully written story, you're doing a fantastic job. Please keep it up!!
Munchy |
 Seanait 2006-05-31 . chapter 16NO!
thats not very carson-like to chuck himself into the way of a knife... but i always figured he would if he had too! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!
if you don't, i'll set evil doca on you! |
 Pike2 2006-05-31 . chapter 16Phew!
Oh my, oh my...
Didn't want this chapter to end. |
 mirkwood cat 2006-05-31 . chapter 16god, you are good at this! |
 blueoctober 2006-05-30 . chapter 16:o ah... poor carson. He's been infected, drugged, beaten up, and now stabbed. What next? ;) Please update soon... |