Here's an OC.

Name: Raven Kanzaki
Race: Human (half japanese, half chinese)
Height: 5-9
Age: 23
Class: Wizard
Appearance: Raven is fairly lanky and has rectangular framed glasses to go with red eyes. He wears a white cloak with a pair of black pants and a shirt underneath. His signature weapon is a saber with Shoukyaku inscribed into the hilt in kanji. He heeps it hidden in his cloak.
History: Raven by no means agrees with what the rionists are doing, only rising in their ranks to scope out how to pick them apart later when he finds a suitable amount of allies who can feasibly help. However, his scoping out is done, and it is time to aid the revolt that he knows is growing. Taking a few loyal soldiers, he sets out to make tangible use of the information he's gathered.
Personality: Raven is easygoing most of the time, but he's not stupid. To go with his job, he puts up the false face of the genuis general. He is a careful tactician and creates the illusion that he deals out more carnage than he really does. He enjoys playing chess or anything else that is of the tactical aspect.

And a phoenix rider would be interesting. It would probably a magic user of some sort with high speed, evasion, and resistance. HP and defense should be rsther sad, though. High movement and luck would also seem natural.

Nice...can you make a person who would be whatever a Hawk Mage turns out to be named Zal. She would use Dark Magic (Fenrir, Nosferatu, Luna) or Animia (Fimblutever, Bolting). Thanks!

Good story. How about something liek a cross between a lizard and a bird, so it would have scales and stuff but would fly with feather wing? Sounds crazy, I know.

I love the backstory. It reminds me very vaguely of LOTR. Also (and rather shokcingly), you have people called Silesians, while I have a nation called Silesia in my fic.

Keep up the good work.

A good substitute for a hawk rider could be a phoenix rider(picture of pheonix)-
or you could have a maerquis rider-

You took a while.this was a good chapter.as for the new class,i have no good
suggestions.

Dude, you exist again! w00t! Great chapter! I'm starting to appreciate Evan more, because this chapter proved he has some semblance of a brain. I kept snickering when I read the town's name. No offense on your part, I just thought it was funny. Speaking of funny, Yenee is turning out to be hilarious. The whole, "By the way, your face is all funny if I look from here. You'd better see Lester," was great. But what exactly did she mean by that? And she can even control her ki (chi, qi, however you prefer to spell it) enough to turn it into physical form! Awesome!
With your hawk rider dilemma, why don't you make some sort of vampire/giant bat-riding class? Or you could make a class where people control their minds to summon some sort of bird-spirit, like a phoenix, and control it with their mind to attack or defend. But since they have to focus on controlling their spirit, they can't attack physically and it leaves them vulnerable when they're in their trancelike state that they go in to summon the spirit. I don't know what you would call that, though. I personally think the giant bat riders is a good idea. But it's entirely up to you. Hope this helps! And update sooner next time! AND I LIKE LONG CHAPTERS!

Another nice chapter. Anyways, I think I have a suguestion. Is Phoenix rider good for the class you need?

I think the new style works pretty well, myself. I wonder what will happen with the Larsons? I like how you're developing the characters, too.
Hmm...an alternate flyer? How about a Manticore Rider? If I remember right, manticores are like lions with wings and scorpion tails. I can't really think of anything else, though.
Update soon! I've really been enjoying it. :)

Nicley done! In actuality, I like the shorter fight sequences better, because it makes the allies look more skilled. And I LOVE how you worked Mike into this battle! He's got more than enough combat sense to go around, and dislikes unskilled swordsmen. I also like how you're assigning teams. If you think about it, you're already developing support conversations! And correct me if I'm wrong, but this "Lucius" is your partner for Ari, am I right?

Off my tangent. You need to run these through a beta reader before youy post them. There weren't many mistakes, but those that were stuck out like sore thumbs. Most of the mistakes you made could've slipped though a spellchecker, which is why you need a human editor to make sure your finished product is quality.

Wow. That's all I have to say. Still, you could do to turn down the 'underwear' obsession a bit. He's perverted, not stupid.Other than that, I see only one problem you might face: you're getting overloaded on characters. You might reach a point of saturation where it becomes impractical to have all your characters in one battle. Prepare accordingly, nd get the next chapter up yesterday!

well,this story is getting better.i thought it may be cool to have an advanced class for the songstress.

Conducter:a woman who sings to heal and revitalize allies. She has learned to use
swords.

ok if you dont use it.

Hey, it's some distant relative of Sain! I hope Raphael and Tobias show up again sometime - they seem pretty cool. And, come to think of it, so does Yenee.
Oh, I thought of some classes...
Apprentice: A basic spellcatser training under a Archmagus. Proficient with dark and anima magic.
Archmagus: A famed magician who can harness the power of staves.
I won't hold it against you if you don't use these - I just figured it was time I contributed something. :)
Bye!

Awesome. Simply put; you're doing a fantastic job. I'm looking forward to your next update with great anticipation. =D

Isn't Lena curious about what happened to her father? Is there no word about him at all? They've probably not heard any news since they're in hiding, but they should be worried about him- and Nelson. Killing the king would be the greatest triumph yet of the Rionist revolution, so they would definitely want to spread the word or have some sort of public announcement...