Uh... Kids don't get taken to Cyberia by their parents. It's a nightclub. They have to sneak out.

Heh.

Lain doesn't DO homework, duhh. She's, like, god or something. XD

Yeah, this is pretty funny thus far. Though the writing is pretty terrible, but what the hell -- it's a humour fic, the writing's SUPPOSED to be bad XXDD

everybody is out of character

Wow. Am I the only one who reviews this? God, I must really be getting on your nerves: "Oh, another review-- Gak, it's just from that weird girl!" *shrugs* Sorry.

Well, since you asked... No, I don't see any spelling errors. A few capitalization errors for songs and the name of the club, but that's it. You're doing good. And this thing is SO BLOODY HILARIOUS! XD Please continue it!

xSJ:)

Wow. Alice has officially lost her marbles. ...And she has a mallet! OH! That's so cool! YAY, MALLET!

xSJ:)

*CACKLES!* A comedy on Lain. That's different. Good for you! Such a depressing show needs a comedy fic to lighten things up. And I can tell this is gonna be great. CONTINUE!

xSJ:)