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| ferryboat George 2008-05-28 ch 11, | abuseDelightful story. I might have watched this 'when' you wrote it, but since I had all three parts to the ending/opener I wasn't going to pause in the middle, even to read something as lovely as one of your stories. Having seen what happened didn't subtract from your story one bit though, it was quite lovely. I haven't seen seasons 9 and 10 of Stargate (I have a great hatred of the concept of the Ori and can't bring myself to watch it; yet) but didn't find your story spoilish or not understandable because of that lack. I love the idea of Carter coming to rescue McKay and finding out how much everyone loves him. |
| MBB 2008-01-23 ch 11, | abuseVery good story. I know it's unfair to reply to such a long story with only a few lines, but I have no other words for it. I also enjoyed how you wrote the dynamic between Carter and mckay at the end. very like they had in Redemption. (I find it missing in the new season of atlantis) |
| Windscryer 2007-06-21 ch 11, | abuseWowee zowee! That was great and I just have to say, for claiming only a little knowledge of SG-1 and Sam . . . you wrote her with more skill and accuracy than quite a few of the more proliferate SG-1 fanfic writers. Kudos to you! As for the rest of our favorite intergalactic explorers, once again it was a spot on job. I can totally see this as an actual episode and that's a rare skill indeed. Rock on with your bad self! :D Can't wait to read more of your fantabulous work! Maja |
| Dimac99 2007-05-10 ch 11, | abuseFabby-dos, yet again. Was a bit put off by the word "spider" in the title but I figured if I couldn't actually see it I'd probably be ok :-) Great McKay/Carter at the end there with the discussion of the very important scientific matters. I missed the large amounts of McKay snark your other stories have been feeding me (OD'ing me even!) but that little bit at the end made up for it, as well as the mess hall scene when Carter found out what McKay had been leaving out of his reports. Very sweet. Great story. |
| SGA Fan 2007-05-07 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis was great. I really dislike but your story was so good that I braved the evilness of it. ^_~ Seriously, well paced and good plot. It kept me guessing and rooting for our team. Also good characterization on both SGA and SG1 teams. And I, oddly, really like the bit about Zalenka and his ankle. I just love little background oddities like that, and I like that it was never explained. It just was. Very cute! |
| Korilian 2007-04-22 ch 11, | abuseYou made me smile so hard. (despite the screaming and blood and spiders! yuck) |
| Korilian 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI'm pretty sure you'd need an insane power source to almost travel at the speed of light, which would be hard to jam into a tennis bal, but this is so exiting that I totally don't care! |
| stargate addict 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely LOVED this story. I read it a while ago, and just found it again, but can't remember if I ever actually reviewed. *facepalm* I have this feeling that I did, but... oh well. Better safe than sorry. ;) Okay, I just almost fell of my chair while reading this: “Nothing,” Carter spat, glaring fully at McKay, whose eyes were closed again, though now he was smiling softly. “Bastard kissed me!” lol! Sam's characterization was really great, also. :) (Yeah, I just had to re-read this...) The comments at the end about the hair- priceless. :D Great fic, thanks! ^_^ |
| lala 2007-03-06 ch 11, anon. | abuseCUTE AND FUNNY |
| Stahchild 2006-12-12 ch 11, | abuseThat was an amazing read! A-MA-ZING!! Characterisations were spot on, and I love the SGA interactions with each other. Carters involvement just made it that much more interesting. Ingenious solution to poor Rodney's demise, and I can so see this as an episode of Atlantis. This was a bloody good ride, and I am putting this onto my favorite stories list and you onto my favorite authors list. |
| Indygodusk 2006-10-11 ch 11, | abuseThat was a lot of fun. Thanks! I enjoyed the carter-rodney interaction there at the end a lot. I totally winced at your descriptions of Rodney with the spider too. The scene in the mess hall of talking about Rodney's actions was very cute. Thank you a lot. |
| LilRicki 2006-10-04 ch 5, | abuseHaha, excellent story so far! I was riveted right from the end of Chapter One - so here's me, saying "good job" from back here at Chapter Five! Oh, and I think you're doing the SG-1 characterizations really well - I don't know SG-1 as well as I know Atlantis, but I loved Mitchell's "Worth a shot" line. I can totally see him doing that! -LilRicki |
| Batman'sBeauty18 2006-07-30 ch 11, | abusethat was amaziing. Completley in character, and the solution was truley genius! Nice job, and very nice Carter-McKay batner at the end! |
| CaptainZoom 2006-07-26 ch 11, | abuseThat was an an absolutely fantastic story, really glad to have read it. Loved the whole 'curse from beyond the grave' aspect, and it really did fit in well with events as they stand in the Atlantis universe! I got really entralled with this tale, drawn into events as though they were an actual episode of the show. I hope my work can be as impressive, thanks so much for writing -Zoom |
| CaptainZoom 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseOh... My... God...! So far, this story is absolutely fantastic! I can't wait to continue on with the rest of this great adventure -Zoom |