This is beautiful.

Yeah. Ichigo is definitely in there - or at least, she's in his. HEE. Right? Ichigo's world? While she yearns for Winter? Which is her world in relation to her zanpaktou and all.

Love the metaphors and the beautiful imagery this one-shot depicts. XD

i couldn't find Ichigo, but i loved it anyway, although i have no idea why. hope to read more from you!

Absolutely breathtaking. I truly admire the metaphors, synonyms -- hell, everything you came up with to capture Rukia's emotions. A wonderful piece; I hope you write more of these.

Neat characterization of Rukia! I like the description of erosion vs. breaking in sharp angles...