Yikes...no! Aw, Logan! Oh!
Anyway, this was really well written. You did a very nice job with the analogies here; the descriptions flowed perfectly, setting a perfectly dismal and dark beat to the whole piece. This was a great line, in particular:

"It’s the catch in his voice that catches you, like silk dragged over wood, kinks that fasten and won’t let go."

Loved the image that conjured up!

Cheers,
Del

Hauntingly beautiful.

This story is beyond words. So utterly beautiful in a tangled sort of way. I'm so glad you wrote a second part...