oo I love this story! I love the line about Dean sounding like Sam, how cute! But quite true, they both rubbed off on each other a lot over the course of the show. Well put!
brovo! You were very convincing with John, while still showing that he's not really a horrible father! I love it, brovo

Awesome oneshot of the moments that could have happened between the time Sam left the hospital and was with John and Dean at the motel. I loved your take on things!

Awesome fic, loved it

I DO love it! :D

Your 'missing moment' is fantastic! Have you done any more?

(Wanders off to look)

Excellent, I almost got a heartattack when they almost hit Sam, and I think you portrayed John very well.

Are you kidding me? It's not done yet! Commercial break ended with John asking "Visions?" rather incredulously. That isn't NEARLY enough to satisfy me! Write another chapter! This chapter was extremely well written, but I WANT MORE!

Yeah, so... How do Sam and Dean actually spill the beans to their dad? Write more!

I really like this tie in! It totally makes sense when they are back in the motel, Sam in obvious pain from the vision, and he explains what happened.

It's almost like he was sick, you know, like a Common Cold...except we don't have anything to cure it. Except maybe another chapter. hint, hint!

;D
Caroline

I really did like this little commercail filler... good job

Ah, excellent as always! I love this, with the angst (because I love that stuff :p) and the tension between John and Dean! Nice little filler-story - I did wonder what happened in that time and you've written it very well!

That is such an incredible missing scene! SN is so complete, so amazing... but stories like this just add a little extra. I loved that John didn't realise Sam was hurting and started to bawl into him, and I love that Dean immediately knew that Sam was having a vision! Perfect, perfect stuff!

Dean's "Don't the women in this town know how to say no" and John's, "You don't have a sister, Dean" - brilliant.
Great fic, nicely fits in with the ep.

Just rewatched Salvation this afternoon for the umpteeth time and then was searching along here and found this story. A great filler to when Sam has his vision then to how he gets back to the motel and what was happening between John & Dean in that time Sam was having the visions. Glad I came across this. Great job!

HEY YOUR BRAIN DID A GOOD JOB NO NEED TO BLAME IT FOR ANYTHING! I LOVE TO READ THE STORIES THAT FILL IN THE GAPS IN THE SHOWS! GREAT JOB!

i loved it i'm so glad you wrote that. i hated that commercial break.

Definitely great missing scene fill-in. Thank you so much, I also thought it was weird how they left Sam in the middle of the vision and then went to commercial, I was like, wait a minute here, you can't leave him like that! Good thing there is fanfic to fill in the blanks. I don't know how I'm going to get through the summer after the cliffhanger, but I'm sure someone will write their version of the next episode :) Loved the worry and the angst, and this line was funny: "“Maybe he went to the bathroom?” Dean suggested, and for the life of him he couldn’t tell who he was trying to assure; his father or himself.“You don’t have a sister, Dean,”..." You definitely kept the characters in character. Okay, I'll stop rambling now. Great job!