just a question. were you listening to the song "even walls fall down" while writing this?

I cried, but I'm super emotional right now anyway. It hit a little close to home.

I really thought this was a great poem. I love the repetition of her name especially. Awesome job.

Soda and Sandy make a great couple.

hahaha this is so much like Dally!

Ooh, that gave me chills. Such depth in so few words. Great job :). Now, on to your new story . . .

Liz

They were all well-written, but my favorite two were the first and second chapters. In a lot of poems, the rhymes are forced, but all of yours flowed very nicely.

I love this! I really liked the abrupt switch to talking about the horse, like it was a thought that came out of nowhere for him. The tone is a lot like a letter I wrote to a guy I went out with over 20 years ago; I wrote it when I was trying to figure out why he suddenly wanted nothing to do with me, and I kept thinking, this is the last one I'm writing, and if he doesn't call me I'll just forget about it (yeah right, haha). So I guess the point is, I think you did a great job of capturing that angst that teens go through when they have trouble accepting that the other person didn't care as much as they thought they did.

As always, I love your writing :D.

Liz

Another fantastic poem. Loved it, not much more to say! Keep it up!

Liz

I absolutely love this, it is incredibly honest and powerful. I love the line, "You know the end to this story already."

Very well written, thank you for sharing it.

Liz

Wow. These were really amazing. You are so talented, and your writing style is so unique. I loved it. :)

Peace..;
Sarah

You are very, very talented. One of the most talented poets I've seen here.

powerful! :)(:

Wow... that third poem was really powerful. Great job!
Scarlett

i like it! its so cute and fits dally all to well