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| chalicity 2007-11-03 ch 3, anon. | abuse*squeals happily and hugs her pillow* XD adorable! |
| jayley 2007-06-17 ch 3,  | abuseawh, that was really good! |
| pstibbons 2007-05-05 ch 3, | abuseYawn. Fics based on the premise of Not Wanting To Hurt Ron's Feelings don't work. You know why? Because Ron is a prick. Hurting his feelings should be made a law. |
| reviewaholic 2006-12-26 ch 3, | abuseomg that was such an amazing story. It was the first one I read when I first came to fanfiction, but I didn't have an account back then! This story is going onto my favs for sure!! |
| CharmedNightSkye 2006-12-24 ch 3, | abuseAw Poor ROn, my heart goes out to him. I feel bad but HxHr are perfect. I loveed how Ron was the bigger person in this. So sweet. Very interesting dilemia, loved it. |
| AgentPersephone 2006-06-22 ch 2, | abuseOh no! I loved this story! It felt much longer than just two chapters! Loved the 'BAH!' part with Harry, bless him and I am the poster girl for going red and blotchy when I cry, meh it's hideous! I'd love to be able to sob and look like some tragic beauty but alas, I turn into Shrek (ears and all!) The end was so good, what will happen huh? I kinda want another chapter but kinda want it left like that, it was truly a perfect ending to a highly realistic and well written short story. Your writing style is clear and crisp without mistakes and use good describing words without looking like you've a dictionary propped open. I really enjoyed this fiction of my favourite ship! |
| AgentPersephone 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseAh! What is he going to do now? I liked this chapter, it was a good opener and didn't go through the usual yarn of explaining the characters before anything good happens. I love the Harry/Hermione ship very much and must confess that Ron is my least favourite character. He and Herm just don't go in my opinion, she and Harry are better matched both emotionally and maturity (if that's a word!) I especially liked it how she and Harry remained mature enough to stay apart for Ron's sake, something he'd stamp his feet about had it been the other way round. It's a lovely theme to begin with about The Dogstar (name of Keanu Reeves band...pwoar!) Anyway, I'm rambling. Onto next chappie! |
| QuidditchGirl30 2006-04-30 ch 2, | abusewait...wait what!?!?! you're ending it here? now? no! dont end it! write about what happens to Ron! hurry up! please!! QG30 |
| Lady Mythology 2006-04-30 ch 2, | abusepretty damn good. can't wait to read more! ~ella |