Now why did you do that? I'm sorry to be mean, but Claire would never do that! She likes Charlie! And apparently Aaron does too! Claire would never say that, she trusts Charlie now! Sorry to be rude, but I need to give you my opinion. It's an ok story, I like how Kate was playing with Aaron and how he loves Charlie so much, but why does CLiare suddenly turn on Charlie? At the beggining of this story they were really liking each other, and Claire shouldn't be angry with Charlie, because he did nothing wrong!

Why did you make Claire tell Charlie to get out?

If you like to read about charlie and Claire. Read Peanut butter Lullaby.

You can not leave it there! you must continue it. please

It doesn't really seem like a oneshot story, I kind of would like to know what would happen next. Do you think you would be able to write more on it? If you are could you like just send me a message or email or something so I know to keep reading.

hey its me just to say there was a spelling mistake i noticed (in my own fic! lol) instead of 'storing' its supposed to by stroking... 'Before long she was awake and Aaron was sitting on her lap holding her plane. He was not trying to break it, or eat it, as most babies would do, but he was just staring at it, occasionally storing it gentley, as though he knew how precious it was to Kate.'.. soz :p xx
- Bored-lil-gurl -

hehe gd but i have no idea who everyone is lol! but good nevertheless Bloody Kisses xx