I don't know if you care at all, but this is not the section that people read. This is the 'Cirque Du Freak' section, but everyone elses' story is in the 'Darren Shan Saga' I'm just saying, if you want more reviews and response.

cheeto's is the source of all life! i love cheetos! this was a good chapter so hurry up an update soon k.

it was a good chapter keep it up and update soon.

the power of evil has once again snatched devon. yayish? goodchapter can't wait to read the next one!

i like whips for some reason. their my 3rd weapon of choice the first two is the broad sword coming in first then the long bow & arrow ^_^ i really liked the chapter can't wait for the next!

right now i'm debating myself whether devon going with the vampire is a good or a bad thing. in one hand if she doesn't go she'll probably die along with her friends, on the other hand if she does go she'll get hurt or turn evil then dies; either way she'll probably die and thats not a good thing. >_< great chapter bye the way loved the way angelica and neal care enough to risk their lives to be with devon and make sure she's safe.

i can somewhat relate to the character i am the cause of someone's eventual death and know the feeling of being alone and lost

as my english teacher would say very good sensory details and good show don't tell moments i could practily see flames shooting out and engulfing a house.

i really like your story and i'm constantly checking to see if you've written another chapter. PLEASE write more!