normally, in stories like this i would request a second chapter at least to finish the story... but your writing is so elegant that to ask even that seems disrespectful to this masterpiece of a one-shot.

thank you for sharing your tale with me.

¡Hello!
Congratulations by this history, really, have enchanted to me. Direct to the heart, of which they mark people.

I request to you please that pardons my thousand of and misspelling others, normally I do not write in English, but I have not been able to avoid it…

Serious too much to request that you gave your permission me to translate this history to Spanish? By all means, giving to your data and all necessary, the only one that I want it is that everybody can enjoy just as it I have done reading it.

I wait for your answer, thanks in any case and congratulations:

Earwen Neruda

Wow, it was super good. Your similies and metaphors were amazing. :)

That was sweet.

Just wanted you to know I loved it.

Even though sometimes I get stressed with unfinished stories, yours couldn't have had a better ending. I know if you had wanted to let us know if they came out alive, you would've written it. Instead, you teach us to savor a single moment (very Carpe Diem ;)). Congratulations again!

Eledhwen Moonlight Spell.

"suspending it in time like a summer flower caught in a crystal paperweight"

That was absolutely beautiful... such imagery... gorgeous :]

are u writing a sequel?

and what happenned after that?
lol do a sequel or tell me, 'cause im dying to know
kiss
Marine

A very strong and beautiful story!
I bow before thee! ;)

aw so cute!!

wow this story would feel more complete if there was a sequel maybe? =)

I read Through the Valley before I read this fic and loved your writing style and I'm eternally grateful that you decided to carry on the fic! This story really is fab, it's been ages since I read a fic that the author has obviously put a lot of thought and hard work into, especially when trying to describe character's emotions, you're incredibly eloquent and it makes the fic amazing! x x x

GREAT story.. i just wish it wasn't a one-shot.. and the ending.. hm.. is well.. unpredictable.. haha.. but i love your story.. it may just be a one-shot but i feel that you've really given your effort to make the story better.. I shall be waiting for your other stories.. and waiting.. and waiting.. and waiting.. haha..

NICE FIC..

-outkasthpfanatic

Aw, how sweet...
But you could've added a last part... Although, it's nice just like this.
But you make me wonder if they failed or if they succeeded. Or if Hermione and Draco live to be with each other, or lose one or the other. @_@;

This story was remarkably sad...I was really hoping that it wasnt a one shot. :(--well better not knowing, I guess, instead of you killig off one of them! Well, I like your style cant wait to read more from you!