Not so restistant now is she say when's the next chapter comin up

Update

:)

omg. its SO good... plz continue?

omg please please please update soon cant wait till the next chap!

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...wow

This is an amazing story.

Sasuke is oober obsessive, and its kind of creepy(I would have been majorly creeped out if I was Sakura)

I cannot wait to see what happens next!

O M G this is awsome you have to write more u are are awsome at writeing sauke and sakura storys pleas post next chapter because this is so col

p.s

...you...ROCK...HELL YEAH ...

angel, sweetie, I love this story and please update soon. I've been read for some chemistry and love making. :)

I L-O-V-E this fic! Great job! The symbolism, the sub plots...lots of fun! Alice in Wonderland seems to inspire a lot of people to write fanfiction. And small wonder - it's awesome! (As was the movie that came out. It was BEAUTIFUL with all of the graphics) Anyways, great job - keep writing!

It's getting so good )

I'm really into the whole fairytale plot

Mistake:

"O…ka…san…?" asmall, squeaky voice.

"a small" is two words.

I like it. "Mad" is so the theme for this chapter )

I love how Sasuke "thinks" Sakura is still a virgin. It's cute

Their mental frustration is really fun to read.

This chapter got me in the mood for a SasuSaku LEMON. I hope one's coming up soon D

I noticed a few mistakes I thought I should point out.

"I will not fixit for you."

"fix it" is two words not one.

TheKnave of Hearts

Again "The Knave" is two words not one.

Naruto kicked Sasuke in the leg causing the Uchiha to hiss and withdrew his hand.

"withdrew"

should be:

"withdraw"

"Heard that, teme?"

"Heard"

Should be:

"Hear"

Lo, Naruto did dropped dead.

"Lo" is used as and expression of surprise, grief, or joy. You should only use it if (Sakura) or the librarian would have said it. It shouldn't be used for naration (thought)

"dropped"

should be:

"drop"

Too quickly, that it made Sasuke grinned lopsidedly.

This sentence can go two ways:

"Too quickly, that it made Sasuke grin lopsidedly"

or

"Too quickly; Sasuke grinned lopsidedly"

Omg please please update! This story is f**king awesome and if you don't update soon im gonna cry, *sniff* lolz over exaggeration much! but i still want you to update *gets on knees and begs*

Thanks love you! (not in the weird way, hope that doesn't creep you out)

XxAmy94xX

this story sucks, ye i said it, it sucks. Everyone is afraid to comment badly about your stories because apparently u are *important* tch not. I am writing anonymously because if ur "fans" see me say this in my reall fanfic account i would be abused over the internet. All im saying is, is that your stories are good but your writing sucks. SUCKS ! you can write so that many thinks you are good but you are bending the rules of writing. I thought i should tell you the truth :)