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| Byte366 2006-08-18 ch 1,  | abusereview number 8 how sweet:P as was this fic! i like your creative writing styles a lot. keep up the good work |
| yourstruly.nishaboo 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseNice...the way it was written made me want to keep reading. |
| Amanda 2006-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseHad so much fun reading this! Very good,the whole thing!!I can´t believe Lindsey did it.That's my girl!! |
| Wile 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was a little confusing at first, but overall this fic was a fun read. Very interesting ending, getting Lindsey involved. Thanks for sharing! |
| Drusilla Braun 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseLINDSEY! Clever little girl. Love it |
| ibreak4CSI 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. Fics composed entirely of dialogue tend to be somewhat boring, but I loved this one. Especially the ending that tells you what happens. Realistic but funny. Great job! |
| Review1234 2006-04-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, they need to do this on the show. It would be an investigation of Catherine and Grissom's personal lives gone wrong then right, which therein causes an investigation of the first investigation. It's so twisted that it's genius. Usually, stories that are composed mainly of dialogue tend to bore me, but yours and a few others are definite exceptions. Yours are witty and capture the attention beautifully, as do your other works with less dialogue. And although this is fluffy, it's just right because you don't go overboard and have everything (i.e., babies, other perfect children, perfect and expensive house, etc.) in the story. Sure, the ending is happy, and all the characters are fairly pleasant -- yet very shy -- when confronted with the accusation -- and I love that you mentioned Judy, because, even though she is a very minor character, seeing her pop up every once in a while is nice -- but it's realistic. So thank you for the excellent read, and please keep writing, because you are an excellent writer. :) |
| Vickysg1 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it! And I can't believe Lindsey is behind it! Good girl! |