HAHAHAHA this is SO hilarious!

ha ha ha that was funny nice going! that's got her tongue keep it up and you'll be the most funnyest fairytelling story writer ever and i mean that!

I really liked the idea behind it but I think that maybe you should be alittle more desciptive in your writing and try to use longer sentences. I really liked it though. I really hope/ wish you would write more on it, I mean it would make for a very interesting story.

wow i really wanted an update but you win some you lose some.

The prince.. well, that was quite a surprise. Nice job!

That was cute ^_^

I think you should continue!

I liked it, it was good.