 Math Girl 2008-10-11 . chapter 1That was lovely; very quiet, peaceful and positive. My version of a space rock would have left a smoking hole in the office, I fear, but I'm going to try to do better, vis-a-vis peace and quiet. Was the Mitalan intelligent? A living thing, or an alien construct? Will it ever appear again?
Christine |
 Claudette 2006-05-03 . chapter 1Interesting tale but - how did the thing get through the ceiling? YOu said the light came down from above the desk not through the window - did it melt through the roof? Dematerialise & vanish? Bother, now I'm stuck trying to figure out the answer. |
 Spense 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Wonderful story. I love the fact that the encounter with the 'mitalan' was gentle, clear for all to see, and (at least at first) non-dangerous. It was nice that it was a gentle encouter for a change. The way the feelings raised in each of them, good feelings, stayed with them for quite awhile was nice too. An unusual story, and one I enjoyed very, very much. It also helps that your writing style is so clear and descriptive that it allows the reader to just concentrate on the story. Great one! |
 Mapu 2006-04-30 . chapter 1It's amazing to read the differences that appear when the same topic is handled by different people. I really liked this, it was so unexpected. Usually when something comes uninvited from space there is mayhem and death but this was much better and I loved the daydreams. A very good job. |
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