Poor Doc. That story made me cry.

Awesome story as usual! Poor Doc, though. He got raked through the coals and then some.

Nitpicky Observation Alert!: Your story takes place on August 1st, but Doc dates his journal entry for July 1st. I thought you might want to fix that.

Aww, poor Doc. You weren't kidding about the angst factor.

Gee, poor Doc. This story really makes you feel sorry for him. I can honestly feel myself in Doc's shoes reading this.

Brlliant ^_^