Nice.
As usual, you delve deep into the mind of the character and draw out something very believable... I wonder about you sometimes... ;)

I see that I up hold my habit of being the bad guy in this...piece. I like the scene with Curufin holding Celebrimbor was a bit...shall we say gay? The boy was just too big to hold like that.

The turmoil and conflict within the father's heart over his son's behaviour and the changes he has just now noticed in his son are very true to life. It makes the father seem more likeable for one of the more vile sons fo Feanor and redeems him in my eyes a bit for the fact you present that he smiles because he knows his beloved child is safe. I enjoyed this very much. This was very well done.