Interesting idea, I really like the way you worded her falling 'like Alice down a twisted sort of rabbit hole' - very cool description!

Although I'm not familiar with the song or your recurring dream, I enjoyed reading this little snapshot. I hope he does pull her out of the nightmare one day. :)

oh, by my grandmother's spatula, i have not yet revieweth thy story!! i do so love this one, i read it when u first put it out, me thinks.. anyhoo, much apologies for taking the story title, no harm intended, though perhaps twas a descreet compliment of my subconcious that hath remembered thy story and thus placed thy title in place of a crappier one that i might have thinketh of. shakespearean/american mood at the moment, just finished my english final as well as an essay about Brutus from Julius Caesar. anyhoo, ttyl!!

I lvoe the blink 182 referance, as you can tell from my username...they UBER ROCK! I LOVE BLINK 182! therfor...I love you, CHEERS!

That was great. Perfect length. You totally got into the way she thinks, completely in character. Loved it!
Ava

LOVED it!

This was good. If you ever give the green light for a sequel, the author has to be as good as you are! Because you, well, you rock!

pagan-seijou

Love your story from the beginning to the ending.

HM Angel. Sorry had to do that. Story was great, well done.