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| lil joker 2008-04-27 ch 9,  | abuseWHY WHY WHY WHY WHY THAT ALL I FEEL I CAN SAY WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AND JUST LIKE THAT THEY HAVE TO BE SEPERATED ITS JUST NOT FAIR ITS NOT WELL THEN I GUESS I WILL HAVE TO WAIT TO SEE WHO BULMA CALLS IN CHAPTER 10 PLEASE DONT LET IT TAKE LONG =..[ (TEARS) |
| TigersBloodMagik 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseWow...Reading your work always sends shivers down my spine. It's only the first chapter and already I'm hooked for the long haul. You have such a beautiful ways of waving a story, taking those two boys and making them your own. Thank you! |
| DemonBishie 2007-12-26 ch 3, anon. | abuse-lemon-? It says -lemon-. *thourghly confused about the current situation that has presented it's self* *huge puppy eyes* It says -lemon- and then they were going to sleep. Huh? |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 8, | abuseWHAT THE FUCK! |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 7, | abuseHAHAHA! YES... okay not the whole.. dying part, but loveing the lovemaking. and Vegata at the end, wanting to cuddle and in the guise of not getting cold.. so cute. WHY DOES HE HAVE TO DIE! Please no.. *pouts* |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 6, | abuseWHAT?! ARE YOU SERIOUS?! O M F G! NO NO NO NO NO NO!! Now your just being plain mean to Neko. ::sobs:: |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 5, | abuseAw... Neko thinks himself 27 even though he also knows he's a clone. cute. I glad that all got out though, no lieing. Neko knows, and he know Kakkarot knows. Can't wait to see where your going with this. |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 4, | abuseYay! Kakkarot freakin cracks me up! And Neko really is talking.. nice... We're getting somewhere. |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 3, | abuseK... I'm stumped with the ending, I feel like it's very likly that was a dream cause A.) the amount of consumed achol, b.) Vegeta says a whole sentance. and the poker. Yup. Watch me be wrong and that actually happened. LOL! I had to go hunt down the uncensored version, Whats with Kakkarot just shoving on into Lil Neko? |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abuseJayzus.. Kakkarot is really into this killing himself thing. I would've just broke them damn door down but okay. Loveing the Neko clone idea. |
| MinklesLove 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseWell, the ending was kinda morbid, it's throwing off my review, LOL! I didn't think this would be good, kinda maybe a crack fic, but I'm loving it. Like the date! LOL! and jelous Neko Vegeta scratching her, and then putting the moves on Kakkarot. LOL! I'm really intriged to see were your going with this. |
| Dragon77 2007-10-21 ch 9, | abuseLoved it! I hope Vegeta did really die.I can't wait to read more so update soon. |
| 2dragonkat 2007-10-14 ch 8, | abuseOH NO, GETA. *sobs* It's so sad it's beautiful. I've really enjoyed this story along with the all others you've written. I adore your writing and how you develop the characters, especially Vegeta (not to mention the smut you write is so juicy and hot, I'm just a pile of goo after I've read something of yours) Keep up the fabulous work. |
| Liddleheart 2007-07-03 ch 7, | abuse*whimper* Poor 'Geta, I really hope you get the chance to update this story soon, I like your style of telling a story, and the way you manage to put the DBZ characters, well Goku specifically in totally different situations, but keep the basic aspects of their personalities the same. So many writers change them too much but you're good at keeping that. I look forward to reading more :) |
| MazlanD 2007-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse^^ Vegeta is jsut so kawaii in this! ^_^ |