Aw... i feel sorry for Riza

I personally am not a RoyEd fan but this story is pretty good

The story has a good plot

Keep up =)

Oh wow. . . this was interesting. . .

Man, poor riza gets dumped for Ed. I really didn't think Roy and Ed would be a good couple, but Riza's pain made me want to cry. An excellent story. I just might have to read more of your stories. Keep writing. Cya.

man, that was tense. o.o (Of course, you can't really have a fanfiction without OOC-ness. Don't you agree. xP)

all righty... ok so im not a big fan of Roy adn Ed slash but this was ok. i think it's sweet that u dedicated this to someone special ;) anyways i oculdn't help feel that Ed was a bit out of character as well as Riza. but alls well that ends well right? hm. keep writing u just gotta keep practicing! ;)