 Ama Uzume 2006-09-19 . chapter 1THis story is now on my alert list. |
 BillA1 2006-05-13 . chapter 1Nice capture of the conversation that we know had to occur. This is good as a stand alone piece as is. Add to it only if you have something *you* want to add, not because others are suggesting that you should. Otherwise I look forward to reading your next story or the continuation of this one. :) |
 HeavenShallBurn 2006-05-13 . chapter 1Love it. Please continue, I thirst for more! |
 Starlight63 2006-05-01 . chapter 1heck yeah you should continue this! I majorly want more! |
 oneredneckgoddess 2006-05-01 . chapter 1Fabulous intro. This has the makings of a truly great story. I really hope to see another chapter!! |
 crhblack 2006-05-01 . chapter 1I enjoyed this. I think this should be developed further. I would like to see Shayera and Mari discuss the revelations in Ancient History and Rex. |
 balletangel19 2006-05-01 . chapter 1I love it. I really do. |
 Lady Jaye1 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Nice. I was wondering if someone would write about that episode. It left so many questions unanswered. I personally would have liked to have seen the conversations between Bruce and Shayera concerning her son.
Nice job. Inspired moments are fun. |
 swarlock 2006-04-30 . chapter 1This was a fine example of writing showing the complexity of a relationship.
I have often said that anyone can be the master of their own fate. Destiny is another matter altogether. |
 rogue empress 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Bravissima. your content and style are really starting to soar. i'm very proud. as far as continuing, i say wait and see if inspiration hits you again. it's so complete in itself, and yet there is room for a more developed story. love you forever! m.o.o.o.o.o.o.o! |