*falls of her chair laughing*

Carth and Atton stranded on a ship together... why the hell haven't you written that?

And poor huffy Kavar...

This was actually more funny than if you'd written the story idea that you had in the story. Absolutely hilarious.
Clogs.

A3,

The build up was slow, but I liked the ending, with the women on the couch. The "orange cone" comment about Carth was also amusing as was Carth's and Atton's mocking of each other's one liners.

BaM

You had me laughing there the entire time--I think you've managed to pull off humour really well. For some reason, the image of Star Trek: The Original Series, came to mind when Carth and Atton duked it out. I could hear the 'Kirk vs. Spock' theme.

I shrug and wave my hand vaguely at the computer. “That can wait. This is so much more important.”

I WHOLEHEARTEDLY agree!

Although, I think a fic about Atton being shipwrecked on a planet of women (ZZTop song now going through my head...) that are chaste and pure. Magic, I tell you, MAGIC!

Nice little piece. I love the viewpoin. There is something subtle about the whole story, not too subtle, but just subtle enough to make you feel like your on the inside of an inside joke. There were a few choice lines,

"Sometimes I just want to take him to a taxidermist and get him stuffed–that way I could still look at him, but not have to listen to him."

"“Let me finish! Atton crashes onto a planet that’s entirely populated by women.”

Atton grins. “I like this already.”

“But they’re all sober, celibate and refuse to gamble.”"

And this last one I found oddly funny. It's just the kind of thing I can imagine someone saying, "“They hate each other. It could be comical.”"

I cracked up over, "Down you go!" I love the banter between these men who have obvious issues. However, we love them anyway. But I can see how one could get distracted by thoughts of them wrestling... huh?

Haha! That was adorable, and really unexpected. Good job having a creative take on the challenge.
"Remind me to burn all their shirts, though."
Oh, indeed. >:)

LOL, this was a pretty funny. I like the dialoge you have going between Carth and Atton and I'm looking foward to a future post involving the two of them trapped together on a strange ship. :)

“You two can fight later after I’ve managed to get my hands on a vat of jello. . .or pudding."

M, jello. *gurgles a la Homer* I think you could write an entire piece wholly centered around Carth and Atton fighting and wrestling and fighting...and then wrestling some more. *pulls mind from gutter* But seriously, their snapping at each other was the best. I loved the add of Carth insulting Atton's "Pure pazaak." Atton, I love you baby, but Carth's right on that one. ;)

You've got a terrific ability for structuring your pieces cleanly that I admire, and this one is no different. Funny stuff, dahling. So now where's the fic wherein Atton and Carth are trapped on an island together? I'll be on the look out for that one. :)

Um, pretty good. I mean it was good, just not as humor. It was cute, but not outrageously funny. Some people just can't write humor. I liked it though. Quite interesting. I'm actually finding people who are more insane than I am on this site. Scary.