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ChaosCarlos 2008-11-10 . chapter 14
Great story, gotta say that it's a little different from other Time stories where nothing gets changed, but it's nice that Harry gets closure and finds a purpose to continue to live.

And lets not forget...

'As we moved into position, I couldn’t resist one last Muggle quote: “Hello. My name is Harry Potter. You killed my parents. Prepare to die.”

Absolutely the best way to end a story!
Loopy Looney Charny 2008-08-22 . chapter 14
omg...i started cryen in this chapter...gr8 story!
BlueSouledShadowDragon 2008-08-19 . chapter 14
Cool story! Well written and a good plot, and I loved the quotes. I have to ask, are "“And when it ends, we shall see who is right and who is dead,” Hah! Another Muggle book. I’m on a roll today." and the last line of the story quotes from the Princess Bride? (I was reading the 'good-bits' version of it the other week...) Anyway, I hope you've written other storys as good as this!
sandybeach6th 2008-06-28 . chapter 14
What an amazing story! You really have brilliant writing talent, I'm so impressed! You're such a good author, and I was in tears for most of this story.

~Sandy~
Artichokegirl 2008-03-17 . chapter 14
THIS STORY IS GREAT I LUVED IT U SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER USUALLY IN STORIES I DON'T REACT MUCH BUT IN THIS ONE I DID IT IS AWSOME U HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL



THIS STORYS BIGGEST FAN,
Artichokegirl




p.s. did i tell u that this story is SPECTACULAR!
Winter's Light 2008-02-02 . chapter 14
I'm glad Harry, Hermione, and Ron met the Potters. Hilarious ending! HA! Great fic!
7sins7lies 2007-11-21 . chapter 14
That last quote was PERFECT! AH! I LOVE IT! The Princess Bride is one of my favorite movies! BRAVO!
maraudersbanana 2007-10-22 . chapter 8
i know that this story is already finished, but i want to know if anyone told you that harry had faced voldemort six times not four, if you don't count this last duel, at the time that he duels voldemort.

one year old; first year; second year; fourth year; fifth year; duel in first chapter.

great story by the way
harrypotterfrizeeak 2007-10-09 . chapter 14
this was a great story.!
hpdegrassifann 2007-09-16 . chapter 1
another great story. i once again loved it! amazing.
ZWngDragon 2007-08-02 . chapter 3
just wanted to comment...No experience with time travel whatsoever and the first thing she comes up with is HARRY!?
Serpent91 2007-07-04 . chapter 14
Brilliant! That's all I can say.. Brilliant!!
the-dreamer4 2007-06-28 . chapter 14
Cute ending. I can see where you just -had- to use that as the finishing line, even though you didn't show Voldy defeated. But then, the point of your story was how Fawkes rekindled Harry's 'fire' and Harry rediscovered himself, not how Harry fulfills the prophecy.

For any readers (like Heavenly Dancer) who didn't get the punchline, it's from the movie "Princess Bride" as the swordsman faced the six-fingered badguy (I forget his name):

"Hello. My name is Harry Potter. You killed my parents. Prepare to die."

changed from

"Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die." (though this version was said in a rather sexy Spanish accent).

Nice job, Fuzzy

dreamer
loveXloss 2007-06-28 . chapter 14
I really liked that you are a very good writer
Heavenly Dancer 2007-06-27 . chapter 14
um, i dont get the quote.
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