 ChaosCarlos 2008-11-10 . chapter 14Great story, gotta say that it's a little different from other Time stories where nothing gets changed, but it's nice that Harry gets closure and finds a purpose to continue to live.
And lets not forget...
'As we moved into position, I couldn’t resist one last Muggle quote: “Hello. My name is Harry Potter. You killed my parents. Prepare to die.”
Absolutely the best way to end a story! |
 Loopy Looney Charny 2008-08-22 . chapter 14omg...i started cryen in this chapter...gr8 story! |
 BlueSouledShadowDragon 2008-08-19 . chapter 14Cool story! Well written and a good plot, and I loved the quotes. I have to ask, are "“And when it ends, we shall see who is right and who is dead,” Hah! Another Muggle book. I’m on a roll today." and the last line of the story quotes from the Princess Bride? (I was reading the 'good-bits' version of it the other week...) Anyway, I hope you've written other storys as good as this! |
 sandybeach6th 2008-06-28 . chapter 14What an amazing story! You really have brilliant writing talent, I'm so impressed! You're such a good author, and I was in tears for most of this story.
~Sandy~ |
 Artichokegirl 2008-03-17 . chapter 14THIS STORY IS GREAT I LUVED IT U SHOULD MAKE A SEQUEL THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER USUALLY IN STORIES I DON'T REACT MUCH BUT IN THIS ONE I DID IT IS AWSOME U HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL
THIS STORYS BIGGEST FAN,
Artichokegirl
p.s. did i tell u that this story is SPECTACULAR! |
 Winter's Light 2008-02-02 . chapter 14I'm glad Harry, Hermione, and Ron met the Potters. Hilarious ending! HA! Great fic! |
 7sins7lies 2007-11-21 . chapter 14That last quote was PERFECT! AH! I LOVE IT! The Princess Bride is one of my favorite movies! BRAVO! |
 maraudersbanana 2007-10-22 . chapter 8i know that this story is already finished, but i want to know if anyone told you that harry had faced voldemort six times not four, if you don't count this last duel, at the time that he duels voldemort.
one year old; first year; second year; fourth year; fifth year; duel in first chapter.
great story by the way |
 harrypotterfrizeeak 2007-10-09 . chapter 14this was a great story.! |
 hpdegrassifann 2007-09-16 . chapter 1another great story. i once again loved it! amazing. |
 ZWngDragon 2007-08-02 . chapter 3just wanted to comment...No experience with time travel whatsoever and the first thing she comes up with is HARRY!? |
 Serpent91 2007-07-04 . chapter 14Brilliant! That's all I can say.. Brilliant!! |
 the-dreamer4 2007-06-28 . chapter 14Cute ending. I can see where you just -had- to use that as the finishing line, even though you didn't show Voldy defeated. But then, the point of your story was how Fawkes rekindled Harry's 'fire' and Harry rediscovered himself, not how Harry fulfills the prophecy.
For any readers (like Heavenly Dancer) who didn't get the punchline, it's from the movie "Princess Bride" as the swordsman faced the six-fingered badguy (I forget his name):
"Hello. My name is Harry Potter. You killed my parents. Prepare to die."
changed from
"Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die." (though this version was said in a rather sexy Spanish accent).
Nice job, Fuzzy
dreamer |
 loveXloss 2007-06-28 . chapter 14I really liked that you are a very good writer |
 Heavenly Dancer 2007-06-27 . chapter 14um, i dont get the quote. |