I love how the writing here goes from calm to hectic back to calm just like the action.

love it!

she certainly can stand on her own two feet! i love it when angel kicks ** :) honestly, this part in the movie was like the scariest part for me :( well done

Aw! That was cute! ^^

I really loved it. xD

Soyus! I can't wait to read more of your stories!

Much love,
Muffy.