I simply loved it!

Good work...love the story. Weren't kidding with the description 'humor' for the story. Hope to read more of your work.

oh snap...he's a dead man. Run, Alec, run man. :)

What in the world are they going to do to get him to talk? I thought he was the or a alpha male. Can't wait...

So sweet he wants to take such a risk so he will remember her. Seth is still a puzzle to me. I think Renfro is about to find out that there are colones/twins that were taken from them by Deck. Tinga I hope will make it back to Charlie with her soon to be son Chase.

OMG! This is too much...lol. Why didn't she know she was going into heat? There was no signs...wonder if Alec is going to beat up his boy.

What's the deal with Seth? Manticore or Unitech? I think Zack is jealous of Seth being with Max. The 'taking advantage' thing must be about the heat she went through and Seth was there.

Are you kidding me! This is too funny. I can't wait to see how she escapes and IF she will help Alec.

I think I see a alpha male standoff coming up with Seth and Alec. I hope Alec wins b/c I want him to be with Max. Also something is with Seth and his top secret solo missions. I wonder...

ok that was funny...lol

I am on the fence if I like this or not. I don't know I've always thought Seth was like her other sibs. Then again I am a BIG M/A fan. I like your work so I'm going to keep reading. Still rooting for Max & Alec. :)

Loved it )

very great story (and old ;) ) i really love it, so bad it's not longer

a French fan

Yay! I loved it! And I stayed up way to long. I love how Alec accepted the name she gave him. I know he did in the show too. But, they were even more rivals here than in the show. Good writing!

Um, Max and Zane? Ew...not what I was expecting...warning please...