I really liked the ending line- it was just so creepy and foreboding, the way the mask was taking over.

thats really really cool and good... Great job!!

Nice premise but I'm not sure if it was meant on being expanded because it almost sounds like it could be...

That was really good. A few things seem weird, but I wish there was more!

I really enjoyed that, was an interesting look into a topic I've actually wondered about. I've always thought of Majora as an evil genie gone worse preying onthe fears of the extremely gullible skull kid.

Was good reading - achitka

Wow, this was truly a deep one-shot with a lot of meaning. It was chocked full of description and you managed to make the Skull Kid seem like a complex character, so kudos to you for that! Personally, I think you should make this kind of thing into a full-blown fanfiction because it could actually work out if you put enough depth and different ideas in it. Due to this little piece of writing, you are definitely capable of doing that-this was very well-written. However, you don't have to take my advice, it was just something that I thought would be cool, y'know. In fact, I'm adding this to my faves.

Wow, now that was awesome. I certainly enjoyed that. ^.^

This is wonderful, a great example of your skill. The dark undertones woven through are masterful...you never hit the reader over the head with what is happening to the skull kid, but it is all there in the text. To be honest, I knew I was going to love this since I saw the summary!