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| Ellyrox598 2008-07-21 ch 6, | abusewow, nice going wesley, keep the wrist blades on while you sleep...nice |
| OMG-its-a-pen 2008-06-11 ch 41, | abuseHee hee, GO TOBI! Its funny, he's my favorite Akatsuki member and I stopped watching the show before he or the other members came out. Besides Itachi and Kisame, of course. BUT I SHALL WATCH IT ON YOUTUBE...EVENTUALLY! |
| Izari-Hime 2007-04-12 ch 41, | abusehehehe great story so far ITACHI GOT GLOMPED:P MUHAHA loved it update soon! |
| digitalcat17 2007-04-05 ch 41, | abuseyou spelled force wrong...^^" YAY AN UPDATE! |
| Dei-Dreamer 2007-03-15 ch 40, | abuseoh i've missed you guys. you in general. or whoever writes this. @-@ i checked regularily to see if you'd posted but... no success. T-T thanks for the belated new year wish. my spring break is coming up so i wont be checking in that often anymore. finally going to california! woot woot! if you had/have writerrs block i understands that ^.^ everyone gets it. i usually quit whole stories because of them. well. write soon. that one person, yumi |
| digitalcat17 2007-03-13 ch 40, | abuselol kinda short... BUT YOU UPDATED YAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAY =D a-hem... HURRY AND UPDATE AGAIN SOMETIME SOON AND NOT IN ANOTHER 20 YEARS! ^^ |
| Dei-Dreamer 2007-01-06 ch 39, | abusehappy new year! its good to be home. weeks of mexicanized exile and not understanding a word... not so fun. i get home and here are 3 more chappies waiting for me! YAAY! and yes i agree with gaara. you are a lazy person to make me wait so long (starts anime tears) lol. these were good chapters. some action. sasuke leaving AGAIN! naruto proud of daddy. gaara talking to sand (normal) so this was an all round good read... and i think sasori's full name is akasun no sasori. sasori of the red sands. i think. i havent read anything about sasori in a long time >.< nu but oh well. *does thumbs up sign* GOOD JOB! YOUR YOUTHFULLNESS IS BEING EXERTED! ... yeah i'm never doing that again... >.< YOUR LORD AND MASTER, C.N.A.L. Ayumi (also mizukage ^.^ tee hee) |
| digitalcat17 2007-01-04 ch 39, | abuseZok then! who KEEP POSTING MAN! |
| Dei-Dreamer 2006-11-30 ch 36, | abuseomg... that was funny...yet serious... then funny again! you're a pretty good writer. adding humor to serious things! the whole naruo screaming like a girl this was hilarious! i imagined that and seriously did a rotflmao! i was like SASUKE CAN SERIOUSLY ALMOST BEAT ITACHI? NO WAAY! it scared me... oh... and... ^.^ itachi was wearing glasses the whole time hehehe! you should give him contacts! once again, your homefry, C.N.A.L. ayumi! |
| Dei-Dreamer 2006-11-30 ch 34, | abuseomg! sorry i havent reviewed in a while! BAD AYUMI! -smacks hand- i got grounded. i had to hurry in reading this one but... i give gaara a 10 in the whole running around cause he's wet thing! kankuro gets an 8 casue he was kool about it and... VAMPIRES?! WO -spooky voice- well. better go read ur other ones! ^.^ your homefry, C.N.A.L. ayumi! |
| digitalcat17 2006-11-23 ch 36, | abuselol. =poke= ya... laura was born ready.. I LIKE WEDNESDAY! K KEEP IT UP BYE! |
| Dei-Dreamer 2006-11-11 ch 32, | abuseO.O... ZOMG HE RAN INTO A WALL! THE GREAT UCHIHA ITACHI RAN INTO A WALL! AND HE AND HIS LITTLE BRO SANG STUF! CAN THIS CHAPTER GET ANY BETTER?! HE RAN INTO A WALL! lol. curse you mangekyou sharingan! and your making tachi-kun go blind! HAHAHA! >.< MUST...STOP...LAUGHING! AUGG! Your laughing lord and mizukage, C.N.A.L. ayumi! HAHA! |
| Dei-Dreamer 2006-11-11 ch 31, | abuselol. that was cheesy ^.^ HAHAHA! AKATSUKI HAS YOU! HAHAHAHA -.- no... why you gotta be random like that? o wait... scratch that. you ARE random ^.^ i just found out in the manga that >.> .< shikamaru smokes! WOAH! -runs around in circles- sorry i havent reviewed as often. i got grounded... again. TT-TT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO... YOUR OTHER CHAPTERS! YOUR LORD AND MIZUKAGE, C.N.A.L. ayumi! >. |
| digitalcat17 2006-11-08 ch 32, | abusewow... lotsa songs.. and blah... lol MY THUMB HOLE SHIRT GO BUY YOUR OWN! UPDATE!! XD |
| digitalcat17 2006-11-06 ch 31, | abuseMY THUMB HOLE SHIRT! T_T. lol UPDATE SON!! |