|Reviews for Fouled Tongue|
| Kyuubi16 6/17/09 . chapter 1
| bluewarrior1979 6/5/08 . chapter 3
Awesome story very different than most stories I love Naruto and Tayuya stories they make a very interesting couple! Please update soon!
| MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 4/25/08 . chapter 3
| NeroSparda 4/7/08 . chapter 3
UPDATE! NOW! Seriously dude, you need to get this up, this has the making of a good story, ja ne.
| Ryu Vision 1/10/08 . chapter 3
so when's the next update oh great one... lol. nice fic ya got goin here man... keep up the good work though or i'll kick your ass... lol
| Jonakhensu 3/28/07 . chapter 3
Wow, this is a great story so far. I can't wait for more.
| Revlid 2/3/07 . chapter 3
Amusing and well-written so far.
Looking foward to the next chapter.
| Zhou-Mak 1/25/07 . chapter 3
Yeah, we did think it was dead, and it's going that way really fast. Especially if you don't write anymore for it. So get going! I wanna know what Jiraya means, the Ero-sennin. C'mon end the suspense! We've gotta know.
| Cre A. Tor00x 1/21/07 . chapter 3
just update soon okay, I this
| The great Khali 1/17/07 . chapter 3
I love your story great writing and really great idea well now im waiting for the next cahpter please hurry up
| Broken-Stairway 12/19/06 . chapter 3
Yay! Finally found a decent Naruto/Tayuya fic. The couple is hard enough to find in general and then I have to wade through a sea of crap to find anything decent. This is probably my favorite pairing anyway. Well I can't really find anything wrong with your writing style. Seems okay to me at least. And I am a wrtign mster! The only thing I could ask for is for more updates so I will. More updates please. And soon. Thanks.
| Xeno the Hedgehog 12/1/06 . chapter 3
What's Ero-Sannin planning? Is the next chapter going to have Tayuya cursing up a blue streak about how she'll kill Jiraiya if he lays a finger on her body?
| hiro himura 11/27/06 . chapter 3
can jiraya here tayuya or not? i thought he said he could but later when naruto asked jiraya said he couldnt hear, see, feel or hear her and he replied that he could not so which is it...
| Kitsune6 11/20/06 . chapter 3
Haha. Awesome. I love alt pairings, and NaruTayu is pretty damn alternative. Their interaction is great. The plotline is very unique. Nice writing, few errors. The dialog and narration are both good.
I'm adding this to my alerts. The pairing won't make this too popular, but it's good stuff. Keep up the great work. )
| Anttolas 11/4/06 . chapter 3
i really like this story, and i really hoipe you could update a bit sooner for the next chapter, but in any case this story is good:)