NarutoTayuya

Awesome story very different than most stories I love Naruto and Tayuya stories they make a very interesting couple! Please update soon!

update soon

UPDATE! NOW! Seriously dude, you need to get this up, this has the making of a good story, ja ne.

so when's the next update oh great one... lol. nice fic ya got goin here man... keep up the good work though or i'll kick your ass... lol

Ryu_Vision

Wow, this is a great story so far. I can't wait for more.

Amusing and well-written so far.

Looking foward to the next chapter.

Yeah, we did think it was dead, and it's going that way really fast. Especially if you don't write anymore for it. So get going! I wanna know what Jiraya means, the Ero-sennin. C'mon end the suspense! We've gotta know.

just update soon okay, I this

I love your story great writing and really great idea well now im waiting for the next cahpter please hurry up

Yay! Finally found a decent Naruto/Tayuya fic. The couple is hard enough to find in general and then I have to wade through a sea of crap to find anything decent. This is probably my favorite pairing anyway. Well I can't really find anything wrong with your writing style. Seems okay to me at least. And I am a wrtign mster! The only thing I could ask for is for more updates so I will. More updates please. And soon. Thanks.

What's Ero-Sannin planning? Is the next chapter going to have Tayuya cursing up a blue streak about how she'll kill Jiraiya if he lays a finger on her body?

can jiraya here tayuya or not? i thought he said he could but later when naruto asked jiraya said he couldnt hear, see, feel or hear her and he replied that he could not so which is it...

Haha. Awesome. I love alt pairings, and NaruTayu is pretty damn alternative. Their interaction is great. The plotline is very unique. Nice writing, few errors. The dialog and narration are both good.

I'm adding this to my alerts. The pairing won't make this too popular, but it's good stuff. Keep up the great work. )

i really like this story, and i really hoipe you could update a bit sooner for the next chapter, but in any case this story is good:)