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Reviews For: The Fortress

Laa Chase
2008-08-21
ch 1,
abuseI loved it so much I wanted to cry.

You're very clever, staying in character like that.

And for the record, it was obvious whose POV it was the whole time.

You're my muse! Thanks for the great read.
dare121
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abusethat sure was good!
Lord Divestre Croft
2007-10-15
ch 1,
abuseSo, did you fail or what?
PekoeArt
2007-04-08
ch 1,
abusei like it a lot, its short, but well written ^^
especially the part, when jo wakes up.

oh, and yes, sin city is more than a excellent movie ;)

bye,
Kirika
Crimson Darkness8
2007-03-07
ch 1,
abusekool fic. i really liked it a lot. ^_^
Fallen-Angel2881
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseomg that was good i liked it...wow...
laundryroom
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseAmazing.
It made me think of the book empress of the world
Not to sure why though.
(probley because I just finished it an its still fresh in my mind)
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I think the way you write is superb,Im rather jealous of your skills.
=]
"I always wondered why it was that they shared when this trailer had so many, but I get it now."
Is it Kyohei words and thoughts in normal text?
Gaia go boom
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abusevery good ^_^ and for the record it's very readable. i think we can all agree that Jo is a friggen cockroach
Ling
2006-06-24
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was something =] i wasnt even sure if there would be any burst angel fanfictions..so i was surprise when i found some on then again..this place got everything =]

the subtl~ty of the shoujo-ai is quite lovely. i love that pairing..and in the anime..ive always wonder since the first episode if they were an item or not..though..it seems pretty obvious through the after episodes =]

anyways..i dont wanna ramble on about meaningless..err..more like irrevelant matters >0<

so im gonna end it here..

overall..the short fic was a nice read =]
Nightlynn
2006-05-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved this and your other story! You should continue on with it.
Makuhari-Fan01
2006-05-23
ch 1,
abuseCool!
Implide is oftentimes better than details.
Haruka's
2006-05-19
ch 1,
abuseWoW That's the best burst angel fic ... plz writ more about Jo AND Meg
xSojix
2006-05-01
ch 1,
abuseI have two things to say.
1st: THIS IS A GREAT FIC! I love the way you protrayed Meg POV
2nd: WRITE MORE BURST ANGEL FICS! There are not enough Bakuten fics to go around.
WRITE MORE! ^_^
animefreak
2006-04-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseYay! You finally put some romance in there princess. Im proud of you. Jo isnt OOC at all, and I think you've tackled the problem of making romantic BA fic without making Jo OOC. People can learn from this. i just hope that, in the future, your BA romance fics can be a little happier for Meg.

Nice work!

:)
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