It's beautiful.. :)

I like this. Bittersweet.
Though, I AM wondering what Jo got herself into to get that injured.
But yeah, very good; I like it a lot. Thanks for the read.

I just...eh.
I love this story haha

It's just awesome. lol :)
Just wanted you to know. The viewpoints just capture it and make it so well rounded that it stands really well as it's own little one-shot.

That was really good... Powerful.

I loved it so much I wanted to cry.

You're very clever, staying in character like that.

And for the record, it was obvious whose POV it was the whole time.

You're my muse! Thanks for the great read.

that sure was good!

So, did you fail or what?

i like it a lot, its short, but well written ^^
especially the part, when jo wakes up.

oh, and yes, sin city is more than a excellent movie ;)

bye,
Kirika

kool fic. i really liked it a lot. ^_^

omg that was good i liked it...wow...

Amazing.
It made me think of the book empress of the world
Not to sure why though.
(probley because I just finished it an its still fresh in my mind)
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I think the way you write is superb,Im rather jealous of your skills.
=]
"I always wondered why it was that they shared when this trailer had so many, but I get it now."
Is it Kyohei words and thoughts in normal text?

very good ^_^ and for the record it's very readable. i think we can all agree that Jo is a friggen cockroach

that was something =] i wasnt even sure if there would be any burst angel fanfictions..so i was surprise when i found some on then again..this place got everything =]

the subtl~ty of the shoujo-ai is quite lovely. i love that pairing..and in the anime..ive always wonder since the first episode if they were an item or not..though..it seems pretty obvious through the after episodes =]

anyways..i dont wanna ramble on about meaningless..err..more like irrevelant matters >0<

so im gonna end it here..

overall..the short fic was a nice read =]

I loved this and your other story! You should continue on with it.

Cool!
Implide is oftentimes better than details.