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Otaku-SIG
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
It's beautiful.. :)
jquackers
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
I like this. Bittersweet.
Though, I AM wondering what Jo got herself into to get that injured.
But yeah, very good; I like it a lot. Thanks for the read.
speechless93
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
I just...eh.
I love this story haha

It's just awesome. lol :)
Just wanted you to know. The viewpoints just capture it and make it so well rounded that it stands really well as it's own little one-shot.
Rayne
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
That was really good... Powerful.
Laa Chase
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
I loved it so much I wanted to cry.

You're very clever, staying in character like that.

And for the record, it was obvious whose POV it was the whole time.

You're my muse! Thanks for the great read.
dare121
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
that sure was good!
Lord Divestre Croft
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
So, did you fail or what?
PekoeArt
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
i like it a lot, its short, but well written ^^
especially the part, when jo wakes up.

oh, and yes, sin city is more than a excellent movie ;)

bye,
Kirika
Crimson Darkness8
2007-03-07 . chapter 1
kool fic. i really liked it a lot. ^_^
Fallen-Angel2881
2006-11-23 . chapter 1
omg that was good i liked it...wow...
laundryroom
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Amazing.
It made me think of the book empress of the world
Not to sure why though.
(probley because I just finished it an its still fresh in my mind)
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I think the way you write is superb,Im rather jealous of your skills.
=]
"I always wondered why it was that they shared when this trailer had so many, but I get it now."
Is it Kyohei words and thoughts in normal text?
Sash'Rahaal
2006-07-14 . chapter 1
very good ^_^ and for the record it's very readable. i think we can all agree that Jo is a friggen cockroach
Ling
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
that was something =] i wasnt even sure if there would be any burst angel fanfictions..so i was surprise when i found some on then again..this place got everything =]

the subtl~ty of the shoujo-ai is quite lovely. i love that pairing..and in the anime..ive always wonder since the first episode if they were an item or not..though..it seems pretty obvious through the after episodes =]

anyways..i dont wanna ramble on about meaningless..err..more like irrevelant matters >0<

so im gonna end it here..

overall..the short fic was a nice read =]
Nightlynn
2006-05-29 . chapter 1
I loved this and your other story! You should continue on with it.
Makuhari-Fan01
2006-05-23 . chapter 1
Cool!
Implide is oftentimes better than details.
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