Wow…a crazy/evil Togepi and another Slowpoke with magical writing abilities. Good story!

This is amazing. I've only just discoverd psychopathic Togepi but it has to be one of the best characters ever. Much more amusing than regular Togepi. Slowpoke was great too. This was highly entertaining. Thanks for writing it. :)

A very well written Oneshot. Also, a great job with spelling and grammer. Well done.

Very funny. Who knew Togepi was so well-read? Hmm, sometimes the smartest people in the world just can't be creative. Togepi must be one of them!

...Heh. I love the Togepi character; why is it, that in every story, Togepi is a maniac? Is there something I'm not seeing here?

I think 'Fluffykins' and Brian would get on well.
=)
What is it about psychotic eggs that is so hilariously disturbing?
Now please excuse me. I must go laugh my head off, and hope that I will not have to clean up the mess it makes on the nice clean cream carpet.
Oh well. I'll get Joe to do it.

That togepi...should be named Stewie.

Very nice indeed.

I liked how you characterized the pokémon, and Togepi. So, pokémon get writer's block just like humans? Haha.

I also loved all the dialogue and humor in this, you made me laugh. Such a good day today.

I always knew that there was something sinister about Togepi...


Entertaining one shot. Great job.

Heh, I liked the personalities. I also liked the way you did the dialogue; it really flowed well as they spoke to one another. Another good part was when you were describing what a good job Pokey did on the story. That was quite funny, in my opinion. ^_^

I cringed when I read the very first line and felt SO relieved when I found out it was deliberately written with such disrespect to the English language! "Suddenly the Togepi looked demonic rather than cute" a classic line in fanfiction literature, great job =)

Yay, it's a random Pokémon one-shot - the sweetest of all bounties. :)

Dialogue - Very witty, rather funny, and creates great personalities for the characters, which are not too exocentric, and are believable - good work on that.

Description - A little bit sparse in places, but is a reasonable tool for keeping the story flowing.

Characters - As mentioned above, believable and likeable.

- Dixie Stonehall.

Haha! That was so kyoot! Pokey rocks so hard!

Hahaha! Great story! Great story! I love it! Togepi had me laughing so hard, I actually had to go to the bathroom! My favorite line from it was, "O Great Holy Idiot." You write very well! And for some reason, the slowpoke reminds me of how I act. XD I'm such a mental retard. Keep up the good work

- A stranger who likes to drink soda

Strange, a little confusing, but very entertaining. Good job!
Update soon
~*~Iddam Soyt~*~