heheheheh roy scored man nice one here

aw...
you write real cute storys- it's unbeleivable!

'please, keep writing!'

Hehehe, really cute! The characters were a bit OOC, especially Roy Mustang but I really don't mind. Great job! ~_~ Keep it up!

::Releina Artemis::

That was really cute.

Nil: Aww, simple fluffyness. Was this pre-black hayate that Fury found or something? I like itm t his is good.

Good fic, but the gift that Roy gave Riza was pretty unoriginal... Poor Black Hayate will have to share Riza with the new puppy and Roy :)

Hehe... I think I know what they're thinking of...( I'M NOT A PERV!! Just understood the concept...)

Aw I love Riza and Roy as a couple, they're perfect for each other. Now if I could get with Ed that would be way better! Chi out Luvs ya laterz!

Oh! How. . .nice! I love your ending comment! Funny!

ok many grammar and spelling mistakes. otherwise awesome. really u need to proofread. yes yes a fishy well... i dunno. awesome keep it up!