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Kyllex of Darkness 2006-08-16 . chapter 1
Awesome! I liked it!
Story Weaver1 2006-08-11 . chapter 1
This was pretty cute.
Vixen2004 2006-08-06 . chapter 1
AW! Gah...an angst writer just muttered the phrase aw. I'm losing my sanity.

Regardless, this was beautiful. I mean, really. Axel was so in character, and he only said one line. No, literally, only one line. I counted. He completely stole the show. You somehow managed to write him so that his character was shown through his physical actions as opposed to over loaded diolouge. Gorgeous. I actually reread the end twice, just because I thought it was so frickin cute. KODAK MOMENT. I was so thrown away by your perfect execution of Axel, I almost forgot about our favorite Savage Nymph. She was beautifully done too, and the way you described her tears, and her lack of familiarlarity with them (I think I just made up a word) was simply devine.

I loved this song fic, and I never even heard the song.

Good job.
GreaserGurlTerra 2006-07-30 . chapter 1
...Hope... I love this oneshot. A lot. IT WAS SO KYOOT.

Yes, that was an intention typo, get over it. xD

Damn it, I liked it so much I dunno what to say. xD

Well, great job. ^_^

~Grease
okiegirlforever 2006-07-10 . chapter 1
Aw, that's so cute. And I freaking love that song.
ceruleanmisty 2006-06-30 . chapter 1
I LOVED THE STORY!
Larxene12 2006-06-19 . chapter 1
That is so wonderful...Exactly how it would have happened if they acually existed...
namiangelus 2006-06-18 . chapter 1
I loved this. The song fit in very well, and it was so romantic...
Tenma-Chakun 2006-06-08 . chapter 1
Bravo! I honestly hate song fics to no end, but my love for AxelxLarxene fics made me read it. And I am so happy that I did! This fic was breath-takingly wonderful! Bravo!

-The Angel Kid
horsie890 2006-05-06 . chapter 1
You bet I liked it! I applaud your in-characterness. *clappity clappity clap*
What? IT NEVER HAPPENS! !!
MushroomFlower 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
Who would flame you for this? It's nearly flawless. Well, maybe not everyone is as big a Larxene fan as I, but it's a brilliant story- total fandom or no.
Eternal Dawn 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
There isn't much to say about this fic but that your writing is well done and I like your choise on the song "Savin' Me" by Nickelback to relate to the fic.
Nox Wicked 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
That was so good! I love the Axel/Larxene couple! Even if there isn't that many of them :( But this was really really good! I also love that song lol it goes very well with the fic!
Xorlia 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
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Yay! More AxelLarxene stuff!^_^
This made me happy although the overall theme isnt as much. XD

This makes me want to write my own Larxel fanfic.

~Courtney
Twethereal 2006-05-02 . chapter 1
Ohh! I like this a lot! I'm glad that there are people out there that aren't doing yaoi Axel fics. That makes me feel better! I love Axel!
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