okay story, who is the hunter and who is the prey? I hate when people just forget to put in some details

Okay... not the best I've read but definatly not the worst. I really dislike the plot and basicly, everything goes against what I believe in BUT it was ever so slightly below decent.

this decribes love perfectly. wanting someone and watching them. love is sort of an obsession right? and i think this totally describes that. but thank you for the note because when i read it it did sound like a real attack and a little scary. does the end mean she loved him back? it sounds like she was held against her will. when you say you were reading 'wicked' do you mean the book by gregory maguire? i've read alot of his stuff (sadly not wicked yet)and i love it. i really like this story too, its really descriptive and interseting. i don't know how you fit such a good story in four paragraphs, but it is amazing.

wow.

this was very dark and primal, absolutely brilliant. i adore the way it was written.

~Rm.

There's not much I can say that you don't already know, dear. This is a powerful, disturbing, harrowing piece of work. It makes me a little uncomfortable, but then, that's the point, isn't it? Art shouldn't be a passive experience, and this won't be soon forgotten.

There are sides to all displays of love, just as there are sides to all aspects of the universe and reality. Does the hunter display his catch with pride while it in turn does not want to belong to the eyes of others? All of hunting and surrendering is encased by the will of the heart and soul, and perhaps it is the will of both that consent is given.

~DS