I love Poe's poem, but this I most definitely raise my had to ^^ you did a great job trying to keep it in meter

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Wow.

I'd never thought that such a nice poem could be changed to this...

I think I like it better now XP

Really though, this was HILARIOUS! I swear, if I was on a balcony I would've rolled my way to death. Oh, this is fantastic.

Well done :D

This was so good! Amazing Poe-esque-ness. My favorite part was:


"Gai!" I cried, "I'm tired, don't you see? If you wanted a challenge go find Lee!

You'd better not continue to beat rudely upon my very door,

your ** I'll kick if you continue beating rudely upon my door."

Stiil the green beast pounded more.

LOL. Loved it.

I really kind of loved the repeated mentioning of the "**- most hardcore" wonderful, creative rhyming (although the meter of the actual poem is ridiculously tricky at the best of times)
Wonderfully done, and very creative.
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Funny. The rhyming scheme could use a little work but it's pretty good.

That was amazing.
The meter was a little weird at times, but you got most of it, and it really made me laugh.

lulz gai cant challenge lee cuz i have him tied up in my basement

XD I laughed so hard when I read this!! This is pure brilliance!

"...I'll leave at once, we're out of time, we're running out of ways to rhyme, be not late to train your team, or they'll kick your ** fo' sho'er!"

Best line ever.

This is a time lapse of my face while reading this.

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This is epic and awesome on a literary scale rarely seen by the human race.

AWESOMESAUCE.

Oh, god. 'Quoth the green beast, "This means war."'
Hilarious. Favs!

That was the funniest and best poetry parody i have Ever read!

lol That was amazing!! So funny... I love the Raven and this fit so well... lol great job!

A parody of 'The Raven'...you have Talent (capital T).

That was an amazing parody. The words were so well placed! And poetry makes me laugh for once!