Wonderful Yumi perspective. I like how you combined the metaphorical and literal.:P

This was really good. It fit perfectly and drew some emotion. Nice.

I'm always amazed by how well you can capture Yumi's character, as I considered her to be one of the most difficult to understand. I loved the metaphor of the stopwatch. It grounds the piece and gives it rhythm.

Now, about "A Road to Aizu"...

Wow. that was such a short, poignangt and very well-written work. I I actually like Komagata Yumi's character. there is such mystery in her that I had always wanted to explore. And I must say that you did an awesome job in writing this one.

I hope you can gift us with more RK stories.

Goodluck on your future works.

-iLychLuna-

Excellent fic. Yumi is such an interesting, yet underrated character. I loved the fight from her point of view. This has helped me to understand her motives even more. I love the continual theme and how you make Yumi seem almost wise. The last line is brilliant and chilling. Wonderful, wonderful fic.