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| moeru himura 2007-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful Yumi perspective. I like how you combined the metaphorical and literal.:P |
| Ds14 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. It fit perfectly and drew some emotion. Nice. |
| PraiseDivineMercy 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI'm always amazed by how well you can capture Yumi's character, as I considered her to be one of the most difficult to understand. I loved the metaphor of the stopwatch. It grounds the piece and gives it rhythm. Now, about "A Road to Aizu"... |
| iLychLuna 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. that was such a short, poignangt and very well-written work. I I actually like Komagata Yumi's character. there is such mystery in her that I had always wanted to explore. And I must say that you did an awesome job in writing this one. I hope you can gift us with more RK stories. Goodluck on your future works. -iLychLuna- |
| White Rabbit Tale 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseExcellent fic. Yumi is such an interesting, yet underrated character. I loved the fight from her point of view. This has helped me to understand her motives even more. I love the continual theme and how you make Yumi seem almost wise. The last line is brilliant and chilling. Wonderful, wonderful fic. |