hehehe that's funny and..cute? I thought so,anyway...

Painfully short but a topic that rings true nonetheless. You should expand the one shot a little. Include some more instances or observations from Oro about his comrades vices.

I too, have wondered how the third vice could have been overlooked. In all fairness, I think all three Sannin are guilty of the last mentioned vice.

Very nice! *faves*

Wonderful writing! I like how the whole story is about him judging his fellow ninjas and ends with him ignoring his own faults.

It's good, wonderful style, not much to complain about. :D

I love the structure of this, and you are very economical and efficient with words. :) This is a drabble, but it didn't feel like one at all. Excellent characterization!

XD Wonder if Jiraiya would care to upload that novel.

hah! That's great! Well it's short but sweet and haha funny in a way... You should make longer fics. PLEASE! Cause I don't see much of them... Well I plan on making one, one day. Well hope to hear from you soon! kay!