Is this chapter supposed to be empty?

I belive the story is well writen, and the author has made a good job with all the technologies of each of the coresponding universes, alltough the federation ships do seem to be much more advanced for my taste, i just hope you continue with the storie since the drama is well developed, i do not belive it is necesary to follow the precept used in most of the TV series where all main character have to live on as in real life that never happens so if Delen or any of the other on Mimbar don't survive it would acceptable considering the magnitude of the villans

Please continue writing, and us know if the stories are on any other location if you have continued

Regards
A sci-fi fan in Mexico who grew up with Star trek TOS, Battlestar Galactica and Space19

Charles

Oh! Now that will keep everybody on the edge of their seats for a while. I can't even guess what you are about to do next.

Finally get a chance to do some reading. I loved this chapter. Wesley connected to the Great Machine - great idea. I do wonder if it would give him some insight to the Borg - if the Borg exist at all in this universe.
Things are tight on Minbar. I am trying to figure out how you are going to safe anyone there - if you are, that is.
I'm glad you covered the political tension on Earth and their feeling toward the settlements and alien races. Most authors would have skipped that but I think that gives better feel for the motivations of everyone.
Once you are done with this I really think you should write a book of your own. Of everyone I've read online I think you have the best chance of being published.

While I am enjoying this series immensely I do have a problem with the grammar and spelling. I keep wanting to whip out a red pencil and start editing! Do you have a beta reader? If not, May I recommend you get one and repost all your stories after editing?

For one thing ... something that truly irks me ... it's shudder/shuddering not shutter/shuttering.

I'm finding this series fascinating, albeit a bit confusing. I truly hate to ask this but could you post in your bio or as a separate post:

1) The stories in this series and the order they should be read.

2) A list of characters, which shows they come from, etc, etc.

I have enjoyed all your fanfiction. But so may have not been updated for a long time. Many of us are just waiting for those updates. Please do keep it up :-]

Another incredible chapter! Good place for a cliffhanger too! As always, looking forward to reading more!

ARGH!! TEH CLIFFHANGER OF EVIL! How could you do this to us?! Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter... It's eating at my very being! :P

I just thought of something that might be relevant. Are you planning on using Minbari telepaths in some way or other?

Wow! Simply...wow!

Amazing chapter.

Thanks for the update. Excellent work!!

Thank you for continuing this tale! Great to see the differences in the First Ones -and- they (two out of three) are not running away. Curious if you're going to go a bit farther with Wesley as he ended up in canon. Enjoying this story in anycase. Wonderful scene with the Minbari and getting the communications online.

Another great chapter.

AlbertG have you ever think of making a crossover between Startrek and Farscape?
The Farscape universe can be the Delta and Gamma Quadrant.
Things can follow canon up to DS9 and Season 4 of Farscape.

Just idea.