yeah! that was really good

>w< Damn that was cute. I loved it!:D

Even if I have over 100 fave fics...I'm adding this >.> So feel honored!

Very nice, even though I don't like the whole 'writing in the present tense' thing.

*smiled widely* I LOVE IT!

Despite your grammar, you make my heart go "b-bump" and my mind go "sque"
Ahahaha, just kidding. I need sleep.
But in all seriousness, great job!

MARY-CHAN!! It's KAYCHAN / KATIE! Remember? From MSN and Deviantart? >3... I dont watch this Anime much, so I was just a little lost while reading it, but you've improved SO much! RAWR! It was nicely written, and even though I dont watch Fullmetal, I couldnt stop reading!! =D... You must write more soon!

xoxoxox
~Burikko

Thanks for the reviews :D

~Nyago

It was cute! :D I liked it!

This is manga based, correct? I haven't gotten any further than volume 6 myself. So, you wish English was your native language? Are you aware just we Americans have ovre 100 different words for dustbunnies under the bed? Oh sorry, I should review the story, not prattle on about dust bunnies. It's a good start, Ed seems much more - tender towards Winry in the manga, than in the anime.