Oh, come on!Please update

Finish it plese!
I've been waiting over a year.

FOr someone who's not a GS shipper you're doing really well :) Great work so far; I look forward to more of it!

"Nobody works any other cases tonight. And anybody who shows up without a vest on is fired." lol. i love this men...

First time or not, I liked this. Good job!

gotta admit, this is the first CSI fic i've read, and it's great. i really like the way you write. any chance you'll ever write JAG fanfic again?

wow that great!, please continue.

This is good :) Hard to believe you're not originally pro-GSR :)

Well-welcome aboard! LOL!

Seriously-this is good-very IC-and the Hank business is very appropo!

But I like Gris's finally focusing on what's important-and the vest part is great!

Good beginning-thanks! Now what?:)

Good start

This story is awesome! I can't wait to see where else you take this. Are you SURE you're not a GSR shipper? Cause damn if you don't have them down to a T? Wonderful job!

Holy mother of...This story is awesome. You're sure your not on my ship, cause you are writing in beautifully! Welecome to the dark side. Again, wonderful job, keep it up!

Hi !!
I liked very much your story !!
Loved your idea of a waked up Grissom, cause it was really really believable .
But I really hope we don't see that scene on CSI to see Grissom open his eyes :)
Good job
Megara

Two really good first chapters.
Please continue, thank you!

Have to tell you that I was really sad at the end of Chap 1, but then I saw this update, and the world got a little brighter. You write the characters and the dialog very realistically, and the concept is both creative and believeable. Is it too much to hope for a chap 3? Great job!