This was a very cute, entertaining read, very worth-while; the only issue I had with it was that I found a grammatical error: "...has a mop of hair, much like his brother(')s..." (Sorry, English teacher in the making, here XD). However, this did nothing to detract from the nice job you've done, and cool that you were able to do it for a class!
I also cracked up at your profile; insanity masking itself in cuteness laced with sarcasm. Nice!
Again, thanks for sharing the neat story, and great job!

That was so cute!

aw. so cute.

-^_^- SO CUTE! *glomps* So much love do I give this fic. . . little Ed and Al were just adorable. I loved how you portrayed them! I hope you get an awesome grade on this! XD

Anyway, I'm off to log onto deviantart. . . for the first time in a while. . . I'm sorry! *feels horrible* I know it doesn't help, but I was actually off-line for so long because of an Elricest project. . . so. . . yeah. . . *still feels guilty for being a horrible mod*

Loves to you, Ra-kun! *huggles*

Aww! I hope you continue with this one! Its so sweet!

Ah, so unique, and cool! No pun intended!

Absolutely adorable! I'm guessing the idea came from the short flashback scene from episode 13, right? I really like it. ^^

^- ^ so chibi and cute !! love it~