I'm always suprised by this pairing. It repelled me ar first, what with my undying love for Wash, but it is very nearly logical post BDM. Nicely written.

I liked this very much. Nice description, nice flowing language. I loved the ending with River "dancing" through the kitchen. Thanks for sharing it.

Very good.

Very sweet!

What to improve on?

Spelling seems fine...grammar seems fine...Jayne and Zoë kissing...JAYNE AND ZOE KISSING?! COOL!

Everything seems fine to me.

here again. Just wanted to say nice Mal refference. ;-) Air lock! lol You really think Mal'd at least think about spacing Jayne if he got with Zoe? Cause I think that's sweet. ;-)

Aw! Another sweet hat! I would have thought they'd have done that sooner because they already seem pretty intimate with the hair grooming and the random touching. I mean he's coming up behind her and putting his hands on her waist? are they doing other stuff besides kissing? -smiles & winks- I'm sure it's all very innocent, because it seems that way. BTW Jayne is so cute! double kudos. -waves-