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mynameisme 2008-06-01 . chapter 38
This was such an incredible story. I seriously couldn't stop reading! And what a plot twist with the Ori and Oma...didn't see that coming. I thought that the baddies would be the Gou'ld. My only question is would Cassie consider Daniel her father now?...and did Cassie ever go to counselling?...

All in all such a beutifully written story. Thankyou for all the effort you put in. It is very much appretiated!
wegeebored 2007-12-27 . chapter 38
I'm pretty sure that you can't just demote someone 2 ranks down w/o having brought charges against them. Why is it that Jack got busted down, 2 ranks no less, and Sam is free of any reprimand? Nice story overall, but demoting Jack wasn't really essential to advancing your plot...
wegeebored 2007-12-27 . chapter 12
I'm pretty sure that you can't just demote someone 2 ranks down w/o having brought charges against them. Why is it that Jack got busted down, 2 ranks no less, and Sam is free of any reprimand? Nice story overall, but demoting Jack wasn't really essential to advancing your plot...
lkhoward88 2007-11-02 . chapter 38
Excellent story!
7 League Boots 2007-06-29 . chapter 38
Whew, that story just rocked! An amazing journey for Sam, Jack and the two precious ones. I love them all to the molecules. Fantastic conclusion with a new little brother for Grace and Evelyn to protect and love; that's gotta be a story! Love the beautiful emotions between Sam and Jack, and the birth scene - precious and tear-worthy.

Kudos for the consistent enjoyment of this story. Sequel? Cool! Love the Atlantis connection; Baby Boy has just got to be as special as his sisters. Take a break and come on back, love to read more of your stories!
mmkfire 2007-06-27 . chapter 38
good story. but what do they name the boy?
does the baby boy have special powers like his sisters?
i like how you ended it.
michelle
scifigirl77 2007-06-26 . chapter 38
Sequel! Yay!! Do it! Please?
Awesome job. Love the story.
Dolphindreams 2007-06-26 . chapter 38
That was such a great story.:D I love all your ideas for sequels. Why don't you include all three ideas somehow? I agree on not just leaving the story there, so whichever idea you do please definately write a sequel.
scarletwitch0 2007-06-26 . chapter 38
Hello! Great ending. Thanks for the shout out. All of the plots sound intriguing. I'll write to your email address to let you know which one I like the best.
allyhaslosthermarbles 2007-06-25 . chapter 38
OMG! That story was fantastic.. my stargate dream has came true, finally together as one WooT =P And with kids.. but please you gotta tell me... what did they call Baby O'Neill??

(Certainly made my 10 hour night shift pass)

Please please write more soon

Ally x
PallasAthn11 2007-06-25 . chapter 38
WOW! I just finished reading this all the way through, and it was wonderful. I truely hope there is a sequel - I was particularly intrigued by the one involving the girls developing their powers. I can't wait to see what you do next!
theNightEnchantress 2007-06-24 . chapter 38
great ch. amd I like the 3rd idea the best =D
ALIMOO1971 2007-06-24 . chapter 38
AH what is thier son name, you could of at lest told us that, and your miss out the '9' in alimoo1971 great chapter and story
MuseUrania 2007-06-24 . chapter 38
Aw! :)
And I like the first and third ideas. Only make it Evelyn unconscious and Grace screaming, like a reversal of how they were during the kidnapping.
KrisK 2007-06-24 . chapter 38
way to go! Keep those ideas rolling. I look forward to your next story!
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