Absolutely loving it :) just a comment on americanisms though, crèche means nothing to most Americans. I had to look it up in a dictionary. Here, it's called daycare. And it's not the boot of a car, it's the trunk. And you don't go cycling, you ride your bike or go bike riding. Crèche was the only real problem because there's no way to figure thar out without a dictionary.
But I really do adore this story :D

I am really hooked on the story, but I am a little confused. Hammond is there, but you switch between Col. and Gen. for Jack and Major and Lt. Col. for Sam.

Wow, i cant believe the astonishing turn this story took! i am truely amazed at how wondriful this story is. THANK YOU!

Nice

That was sooooo cruel! how could you... :'( got to read more...!

Aww come on now, any kid of Carter's has simply got to have that glorious true blonde hair and enormous bright blue eyes. None of this mousy brown stuff! I'm sure Jack would see to it somehow ;)

This is a great story and I'm sorry to see that you haven't posted a sequel.

Blah, you didn't tell us the baby's name (

This was such an incredible story. I seriously couldn't stop reading! And what a plot twist with the Ori and Oma...didn't see that coming. I thought that the baddies would be the Gou'ld. My only question is would Cassie consider Daniel her father now?...and did Cassie ever go to counselling?...

All in all such a beutifully written story. Thankyou for all the effort you put in. It is very much appretiated!

I'm pretty sure that you can't just demote someone 2 ranks down w/o having brought charges against them. Why is it that Jack got busted down, 2 ranks no less, and Sam is free of any reprimand? Nice story overall, but demoting Jack wasn't really essential to advancing your plot...

I'm pretty sure that you can't just demote someone 2 ranks down w/o having brought charges against them. Why is it that Jack got busted down, 2 ranks no less, and Sam is free of any reprimand? Nice story overall, but demoting Jack wasn't really essential to advancing your plot...

Excellent story!

Whew, that story just rocked! An amazing journey for Sam, Jack and the two precious ones. I love them all to the molecules. Fantastic conclusion with a new little brother for Grace and Evelyn to protect and love; that's gotta be a story! Love the beautiful emotions between Sam and Jack, and the birth scene - precious and tear-worthy.

Kudos for the consistent enjoyment of this story. Sequel? Cool! Love the Atlantis connection; Baby Boy has just got to be as special as his sisters. Take a break and come on back, love to read more of your stories!

good story. but what do they name the boy?

does the baby boy have special powers like his sisters?

i like how you ended it.

michelle

Sequel! Yay! Do it! Please?

Awesome job. Love the story.