not your best.

nice story... cute and funny... really liked it... good job... great work...

pretty story :D it was funny how Ryoma relies on his cap to hide his face xD He has it everywhere.

cute one shot! ^^

I like it. Good job on the characters. It's true that they should like each other for who they are, not what they are not.

its cute. i like it.

Er...I am not flaming u but shouldnt it be "tickled" instead of "tackled"? haha..
nice storii!~

Kya~~ I loved the bit when Ryoma tapped her shoulder!!
It was so cute and so Ryoma-like...00
Keep up the good work!

haha "no caps". This was cute.

*nods* that's how love should be. :-) being yourself.

Cool! Ryoma is just so sweet! Kawaii! I think Sakuno is just being herself and you didn't make her OOC... ^_^ though you could have made it a little longer... ~_^

Wonderful story! I really liked Sakuno in this one. Her worrying about how she looked or if Echizen was telling the truth really did sound like something she would say. Once again, great story!

Nice story!

So cute.

m... i just watched the video you have at xanga,and i was like.. OO awesome ;o; i was so m excited? hahaha.I'm definitely going to buy the whole anime.

Sorry for my lame english, i speak spanish!:), just write more i like it a.l.o.t! :)

Chao!

Woah. A bit too self-conscious ne? >