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RedBrunja
2009-10-25 . chapter 19
Oh, this was fun!
Decollage
2009-10-25 . chapter 4
Arther, Mab, Mordred- that would make Bran... Lancelot? I rather wish I knew more Welsh. Beautiful story. So much more depth than the actual film.
Decollage
2009-10-25 . chapter 3
Now Toggle makes a great deal more sense.
Blonde-Existentialist
2009-10-20 . chapter 18
Particularly amusing and entertaining, especially reflecting on it when thinking of the actual Hall of Mirrors and their almost ethereal magic.
Blonde-Existentialist
2009-10-20 . chapter 19
Quite lovely oneshot-ish things with a surprising amount of substance and backstory to go along with them, and clearly steeped in the old lore and tradition. Though I must say its a shame you stopped at 19. Such an uneven number.
Anonymous
2009-07-14 . chapter 19
As always, you are, I consider one of the more prolific writers of Laby tales. Spellbinding, intriguing, charming and all-around just damn good. Hope to see more of your work in the near future.
ephemeral eternities.
2009-03-22 . chapter 6
Wow. This is great. This is really good. Heartrending, but wonderful. I normally dislike OCs in the Labyrinth, but I really like Bran. Can you do one of his impressions of Sarah, next?
Freyalyn
2009-03-18 . chapter 15
Oohh - shiver down the spine. It works..
MorgauseNokami
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
Oh boy, you are good. I can already going to tell I'm going to enjoy this :)
magialuna
2009-02-17 . chapter 19
All of these are so good in such unique and far ranging ways. They are really amazing. Sad and melancholy most of them, but still beautiful short portraits. -Clare
Chanteur d'ombre
2009-02-11 . chapter 19
You write beautifully.
J Luc Pitard
2009-02-09 . chapter 19
This review is for the last 2 updates- Caprice and Carnivale:

Both of these are fun. I like the idea of Jareth toying with the Sun King, though I'm surprised it ended so well for the king. The image of Jareth, one day cloaked in splendor and the next at home on the ground, was powerful.

The Rio story hints at so much and yet is complete on its own. Her dreams are her own, except when they're his. The only thing that would've made this one shot better, in my opinion, is some hint as to her post dream thoughts. Was she disappointed it was over? Annoyed at his pushing her into a more sexual situation? Shaking her head, trying to remember the dream at all? Was this one of many odd dreams she could or couldn't remember or did he only do this now and then? Really good build up, but the last of it left me with a need to know.
Athena's Avatar
2009-02-06 . chapter 19
Oh... how painfully gorgeous. I want to know more about what Jareth dreams!
notwritten
2009-02-05 . chapter 19
Thank you for sharing these chapters. Keep smiling. :-)
Tar Irene
2009-02-05 . chapter 18
Jareth makes la Galerie des Glaces! With sand from the Labyrinth's deserts. . . How wonderfully funny.
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