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MaggieMai 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful work. Your writing has this way of either making my heart ache or my skin crawl. Absolutley love it. Keep up the wonderful work.
BlindHuntress 2008-09-12 . chapter 14
I wish Jareth was my protector *le sigh*

SO GOOD! Can't wait for more!
notwritten 2008-08-24 . chapter 14
A very interesting, and pleasant chapter. Keep smiling. :-)
leian 2008-08-24 . chapter 14
*meep* ...

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It's a snippet.. _how_ do you pack this much _punch_ into it!

Needless to say, excellente, mon amie!
Fenikkusuken 2008-08-24 . chapter 14
Thank you for a fine read on a drizzly Sunday afternoon; your terse, exactingly-worded style is always a delight!
Steph 2008-08-24 . chapter 14
Nice chapter. Your descriptions are wonderfully detailed, and tell such a story. Normally, I dislike drabbles, but yours are exceptional.
dansemacabre 2008-08-24 . chapter 14
Another amazing oneshot, thank you. You are one of the few writers on this site who does a credible darker side of Jareth. So often, an attempt to write about Dark!Jareth comes off as contrived and rather hollow. We're asked to just accept that characterization, even when we're not provided with a decent backstory to support it.

When you do it, however... I believe. ;)
Fenikkusuken 2008-08-11 . chapter 12
This gave me the shivers on a hot summer day. Thank you for your perfectly honed descriptions.
notwritten 2008-07-11 . chapter 12
This chapter is good, and very interesting to read. Thank you for sharing. Have a good weekend. Keep smiling. :-)
Anij 2008-07-11 . chapter 12
black and grey and silver, cashmere and silk;

-- Oh...I actually swooned at this. I LOVE it when he's Aboveground and dressed appropriately. So few stories out here do this.

I think we all got that strange, bitter yearning.
dansemacabre 2008-07-11 . chapter 12
Cold and bittersweet. I can see him dressed in those winter colors, disappearing in the crowd-- wonderful work, as usual.
P'tfami 2008-03-16 . chapter 11
I used to follow 'The Catalyst's' progress for a while - its a pity that its discontinued. Likewise with these entries. There's a running theme of melancholic pathos that make each entry rife with insights. That, and I think one more entry would complete the set making twelve in all or perhaps thirteen? in keeping with the Labyrinth's theme?
ILB 2008-02-27 . chapter 9
I really, really liked this one, too.

This was just... it really struck a chord with me! I really, really liked it! (I know I'm redundant, but... Heh.) You capture so much in so few words. I admire that trait. This was great! Glad I got to read it.
ILB 2008-02-27 . chapter 1
Oh, that was good. So very, very bittersweet. It was well-written and made its point very, very well.

Even though I'm an enormous fan of happy endings, I'm definitely going to go read the rest of these. Great job!
notwritten 2008-02-26 . chapter 11
Very interesting, and nice chapter. Keep smiling.:-)
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