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DefinePatience
2009-07-08 . chapter 21
I LOVE all your Crash stories! I just can't help but squeal and dance around. It's absolutely fabulous.
Cookie Dough Gal
2008-05-18 . chapter 3
I love this story so much! (I'm rereading it)
But there is one detail you missed:
Degrassi is a Canadian show, health care is free.
But besides that, this story is amazing, and yeah, it would suck to have to pay for treatments and the baby.
Kuddls
2007-01-27 . chapter 21
Aw, they deserve for things to be a little perfect for awhile. The last part was cute, with Julia squealing out in protest. lol
Mayberry
2007-01-21 . chapter 21
Whoa, YOU updated? :P LOL. But it was a totally great chapter. So glad both Ash and Julia are okay, and Craig's being so supportive. Aw. I'm a little worried that since Julia can pretty much walk, no one will be able to stop the girl. Aw, a piano. That's so sweet to think about, and I could imagine Craig eventually getting her one. Great job. Don't make us wait too long now. lol.
justloverain
2006-12-21 . chapter 20
i love all of your stories! i really love this one! i love that they have a child together!!
-lalatina15-
2006-12-18 . chapter 20
Aw, going wedding dress shopping! I want to get married just for the dress - LOL. I loved Paige with her whole "Are you sticking with the no white because you’re not a virgin rule or…” So very her. And Joey's the best man? Awesome! =)

-Joa
Mayberry
2006-12-16 . chapter 20
Aw, what a VERY cute chapter. I'm so glad it was Joey. It made my night. That was my secret wish. My second choice would be Marco. Then Sean. Then Jimmy. LOL. It's so cute/realistic to see Paige and Ellie bickering over what Ash should wear and do. Can't wait to see the wedding, and what Ang will do.

Julia's a speed demon. ;)
XxSopherzzxX
2006-11-21 . chapter 19
Awesome. I'm soo happy for an update.
catn3d
2006-11-09 . chapter 19
Aww, Craig asked Kate for permission and...she said yes! They should do it in Vegas, I'll meet them there ;) OK, that doctor's an idiot! I'd be freaked out forever now if I was them. And who in the heck is gonna be Craig's best man? Joey?
-lalatina15-
2006-11-07 . chapter 19
Hm, Kate walking in on them... now that'd be interesting! I couldn't even imagine her reaction! Ha! She's a smart one though, she knows CrAsh was in that room having wild and kinky sex ;) Is the best man going to be Jimmy? 'Cause that would be hilarious. I liked the chapter, I think it was super cute. I loved Ellie's reaction. If she's like that, yeah, I can only imagine Paige! Let the preparations begin!

-Joa
kaleidocat
2006-11-06 . chapter 19
Well, I liked this chapter a lot. Hm, I wonder what could have inspired the talk about Kate walking in and discovering a nude or semi-nude Mr. Manning? = ) “I don’t think any of us are ready for the trauma of her seeing you naked in my bed.” “It’s not like she doesn’t know we’ve had sex before. With the hotel room incident and the baby, I think she’s figured it out by now.” I loved those two lines. It's so nice to see Kate being so supportive of Crash. And Ellie is adorable. Who's going to be Craig's best man? Joey? Sean? Jimmy (hahaha)?
Mayberry
2006-11-06 . chapter 19
Oh, is the best man Marco, Joey, Spin? Better not be Jimmy. lol. j/k. Ha, I loved Kate's sarcasm. Yep, Ash, if she doesn't suspect things are happening in that room, she must've been hiding under a tree. Aw, CrAsh cuddling. No, not baby Julia. :( Please let her be okay. Ha, Ellie was so cute; I can see her acting like that. Yeah, Vegas, baby, but still gotta invite Paige, Craig. :P I actually enjoyed this chapter a lot, no filler. :D I sucked my thumb too, and yeah, I'd take that out of her mouth now so she won't have to deal with braces. Hmph. lol.
Zoe4
2006-10-19 . chapter 18
Well that was worth the wait. I love Julia I just want to wrap her up in a bow and take her home, I love babies and even though I can't see her, I know she is aborable. I think my favorite scene had to be when Ash was getting her to crawl, just about the most adorable thing ever. Plus bringing Crash back to the woods and you ragging on Jimmy, aww sigh. Lol..to Ash "ruining" the mood and then to the pants on the lamp comment. And of course I loved the ending ;)
kaleidocat
2006-10-17 . chapter 18
So that's the real reason Ashley stayed in England! Pregnancy and Leukemia is quite the combination but I buy that she stayed away because she was trying to adjust and didn't want to create conflict and hurt anyone anymore. That's more believable than Ashley staying overseas for a guy.

What a crazy ride reading all this has been! Poor Ashley, I'm glad that she's realizing that she can't do it all on her own and it's been so great reading how her family and friends are helping out. The parts with Craig and Kate interaction were touching, although I felt kind of awkward for Craig since Satan Kerwin hasn't always been his biggest fan. It's been nice to see this other side of Kate.

I'm so happy that Craig finally gets to have a family of his own and he seems to be appreciating it so much. It was so sweet when Ashley told him that she didn't want him to lose another family member/person he loved.

Overall, there's been a nice balance of fluffy Crash romance and angst of being young parents and dealing with someone being sick. Craig's cute as he tries to woo her and Ashley is the usual practical one. Love how their engagement brings back a flasback of VC and DIB.
-lalatina15-
2006-10-17 . chapter 18
“Well, just don’t throw my pants on the lamp this time, you might break something.” - LMAO - I absolutely loved that line! The chapture was great, especially the end ;) I really liked Craig taking Ash into the woods where they praticed for Kwan's class - super cute! Aw! Sorry I took so long btw... and, um, what's this I hear about a 21st bday?? When?? -Joa
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