   Mrs.Scarlettbutler 2007-02-11 . chapter 4What an amazing story...thank you for writing it |
| neeki 2005-03-11 . chapter 4 look at that, you made me cry. |
 Divamercury 2005-01-01 . chapter 4Beautiful. I LOVED this. Thank you so much for sharing.
~DM |
| Acetoorion 2004-07-23 . chapter 4 Fantastic, very well written and insightful. It's so nice to see a fic where the author has a good command of the English language as well! I especially liked the references to T. S. Eliot, who is also my favourtie poet and it was recognising the title as a line from "The Hollow Men" that lead me to read this story to begin with. Keep writing. |
| angel of darkness 4585 2004-03-05 . chapter 4 Wow. Just...wow! That was amazingly wonderful! It was very different to any I've read before. Usually, the story has Trinity and Neo falling for each other immediately, which is great, but yours had a great twist. Loved it.
aod4585 |
 Trialia 2003-11-28 . chapter 4Wow. Just, wow. |
| Morithil 2003-10-26 . chapter 4 Hi Centaur - thanks for the review you sent on Objects In The Mirror-much appreciated; updates are on the way...
This is brilliant! You've convincingly jacked into Trinity's character and what you've written might as well have been in the films themselves because it's THAT believable.
The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock!! I love that poem...
"I have seen them riding seaward on the waves
Combing the white hair of the waves blown back
When the wind blows the water white and black.
We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown
Till human voices wake us and we drown" |
| Marilia 2003-07-09 . chapter 4 Wonderful! |
| PokeyOoOky 2003-05-11 . chapter 1 continue!! great job! |
| Jennifer Jolie 2002-11-11 . chapter 4 WOWWWWWWW. |
| Chord 2002-09-02 . chapter 1 You do have talent for fitting the entire movie, (plus a bit of the past and a possible future) into one, beautiful Trinity fic. Nice to finally see something called 'love' related with her.She deserves it and who else can give it to her than Neo? This one's my favorite. |
| Caffeinesprite 2002-04-14 . chapter 4 That was beautiful! ^_^ Really, it was! You should be proud of such a great fan fic. |
| Pam 2001-08-23 . chapter 4 Your story "Because Life Is..." was a great story. You did a great job in incorporating things from the movie and things you had to make up. This was one of the best fan fics i've read in a long time, I hope you write more like it. |
| Tegan 2001-07-10 . chapter 4 this is really good! |
| ceridwen-amyed 2001-07-08 . chapter 4 Oh, this was so good... I've always thought with this type of fan fic that they should give you a better understanding of the characters and their emotions. And you did that so well... Write more! |
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