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| Crashxin2xMe 2007-02-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseomg, that was amazing! truely! i love JACK/CHLOE!! haha - i wrote one ; not nearly as good as yours but you might want to check it out! 24 ROCKS MY FUZZY SOCKS!! [great job!!] xox |
| Sutzina Zion 2007-02-04 ch 3,  | abuseHaha... handcuffs. Cute story. Lol I'm like reading every Jack/Chloe story in preparation for tomorrow's episode. I know that there aren't going to be any Chlack moments and it bothers me, so I'm reading up on fanfiction to ease my pain lmao. |
| leeza77 2006-06-19 ch 3, | abuseLoved it! |
| sawyersgrl15 2006-06-18 ch 3, | abusefirst of all, i wanted to make a mention about your summary. that was what made me want to read this story! i love it! and yes, jack does NOT go around singing about his feelings. secondly, absolutely adorable story! i want you to keep going! thirdy...oh there isn't much else to say except you have written a rather adorable Jack/Chloe story. kudos!! sawyersgrl15 |
| Tigerlily Brown 2006-06-11 ch 3, | abusecute! |
| Kari 2006-05-30 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love it! One of the best J/C fics I've seen! More please. |
| M. Dobbs 2006-05-27 ch 3, | abuseBrilliant. And, I think this story ties in very nicely with the actual show, which is a rarity among fan fictions (although not always a bad thing). I look forward to reading more of anything you write. Good job as usual. |
| MrsEads 2006-05-27 ch 3, | abuseI really liked this story. You did a very nice job with the Buchanan/Chloe talk. The Chloe/Jack heart-to-heart was very well-done too. I must say, I was a bit surprised when Jack "kidnapped" Chloe, but I think you made it work. Nice job! |
| MrsEads 2006-05-27 ch 2, | abuseOoh...How will he prove it to her? Dun dun DUN! Another great chapter, and I look forward to the end to see what happens! |
| MrsEads 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseVery good job. I look forward to reading the next chapter. And you're right, it seems that everybody who ever gets close to Jack ends up dead. |
| Eleanor J. 2006-05-27 ch 3, | abuseAw... sweet ending. I loved the Stockholm Syndrome line. Great job. |
| Zelofheda 2006-05-27 ch 3, | abuseAw, that was sweet. I laughed at the "marriage conspiracy" part, and Jack's musical skills, and the way Chloe said they should just do it. I also thought that Chloe's character developed very nicely, from pushing Jack away at the beginning, to accepting him at the end. Very enjoyable. |
| anne 2006-05-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is officially my new favorite story! I really hope you update soon! |
| KatLilly86 2006-05-14 ch 2, | abuse"She had just set Jack Bauer a mission, and if there was one thing she knew about Jack Bauer, it was that it didn’t like failing a mission." Definitely... I doubt that Jack has ever failed a mission. It simply isn't done. Great chapter. I like how you make Chloe so analytical when she's stressed and how she doesn't just jump into the relationship w/ jack even though we know she loves him. Very in character. Can't wait for more. |
| KatLilly86 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWow amazing first chapter. Very powerful... my favorite part was this- Jack shook his head, “Chloe, I don’t trust anyone the way I trust you. I know you’d never work with terrorists. Besides,” he smiled crookedly at her, “the day you work for terrorists is the day I can’t stop them. You’d never be that sloppy. You’d never let us get that close.” (So true! Chloe is amazing and the only one Jack can trust.) |